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Band 6+: The chart below shows the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (nguồn ielts-exam.net).

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The image shows a pie chart comparing what makes people most happy by age group: under and over 30 years old. For people under 30, traveling (26%), having a good appearance (21%), and doing hobbies (15%) are the top three, while for people over 30, financial security (32%), achievement at work (24%), and doing hobbies (24%) are the top three. Other factors like doing sports, having a good appearance, and free time for relaxation have less impact on happiness for both age groups.

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The two charts illustrates the conclusion of a survey about the reasons behind people happiness. The survey was conducted between two groups: people under 30 and people over 30.

Overall, in both age groups work achievement and hobbies play a major role behind happiness. People under 30 find happiness in their good appearance however it does not matter among people over 30.

Both category of people find themself happy when they are rewarded in their profession. About 32% of people over 30 and 31% of people under 30 find it delightful. Similarly, being involved in their hobbies give 22% people under 30 and 24% people over 30 pleasure.

Similarly, appearance matter in 18% of people under 30 however outer look does not even matter among people over 30. About 15% of people under 30 find bliss in travelling. Meanwhile, 20% of people over 30 are satisfy when they have financial security. Apart from this 14% of people under 30 and 10% of people over 30 find happiness in other factors.

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under: 7

happiness: 4

about: 3

their: 3

matter: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and presents an overall trend, but it contains several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the percentages for 'achievement at work' and 'doing hobbies' are not correctly reported for both age groups, and the data for 'traveling' and 'financial security' are misrepresented. Additionally, some key categories such as 'doing sports' and 'free time for relaxation' are not mentioned. The report would benefit from a clearer structure, more precise data reporting, and a more comprehensive summary of the main features and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'Both category of people find themself happy'). The use of cohesive devices is limited, and some sentences are repetitive. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic. Also, avoid informal or incorrect phrases like 'find themself' and 'does not even matter'.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'conclusion' instead of 'results', 'delightful' instead of 'happy'). However, there are several inaccuracies and awkward choices (e.g., 'people happiness' should be 'people's happiness', 'satisfy' should be 'satisfied', 'outer look' is informal). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary, and ensure correct word forms and collocations. For example, 'financial security' is used correctly, but 'achievement at work' could be paraphrased as 'career success'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex sentences, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'The two charts illustrates' should be 'The two charts illustrate', 'people happiness' should be 'people's happiness', and 'find themself' should be 'find themselves'. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, proofread carefully and practice using a wider range of grammatical structures, such as relative clauses and passive voice, with accurate punctuation.

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Band 6+: The chart below shows the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (nguồn ielts-exam.net).

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