Band 6+: The chart below shows the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (nguồn ielts-exam.net).

The pie chart illustrates the results of a survey about what people of different age (under 30 and over 30) groups say makes them most joyful.

Overall, the percentage of people who find happiness in achievement at work is relatively high in both groups, and people under 30 and over 30 feel similarly about this factor. However, younger people tend to value appearance and personal achievements more, while older people place greater importance on financial security and other factors.

Younger people appreciate more having a good appearance with 18% but it doesn’t make older people happy.Happiness from doing hobbies in both age categories is not much different,and accounts almost the same amount;the percentage of younger people who get pleasure doing hobbies makes up 22%,while the percentage of people over 30 accounts 24%.The amount of older people who get satisfaction from financial security constitutes 10%; young people don’t care about it.

Most of all,what makes both categories people happy is-achievement at work,and it accounts for 32% in both charts.Being with family doesn’t affect the happiness of young people,but it is important for older people,and the percentage of older people who like to spend time with family is 14%;young people get satisfaction from travelling (15%). Young people have more fun from other factors such as walking,spending time with friends and much more at 14%,while the number of older people who get happiness from this makes up only 10%.