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Band 6+: The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist atiraction in Britain in the year 1999 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains a pie chart titled 'Distribution of visitors to different types of tourist attractions in Britain, 1999', which shows percentages for four categories: Theme Parks (38%), Museums & Galleries (37%), Historic Houses & Monuments (16%), and Wildlife Parks & Zoos (9%). The Theme Parks slice is expanded into a breakdown of specific parks with their respective visitor percentages: Alton Towers (17%), Pleasureland, Southport (16%), and Legoland, Windsor (10%). Blackpool Pleasure Beach and Chessington World of Adventure are also listed, but their percentages are not specified.

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The pie chart depicts four various types of tourist attraction places in Britain in 1999.

Overall, theme parks and museums and galleries together make up the majority of tourist attractions place in that year, while blackpool pleasure beach account for higher shares of visitors in the theme park sector.

In the terms of visitors attractions, theme park constitutes the largest portion at 38% followed by museums and galleries at 37%. Historic houses and monuments represent 16%, whereas wildlife and zoos indicates much smaller proportion, standing at 9%.

By contrast, the pattern of theme parks differs considerably. Blackpool pleasure beach remains the major contributor, at 47%, while Alton towers become the second largest source, 17% of total visitors, followed by pleasureland Southport, with16%. However, chessington world of adventures and legoland windsor contributes the least, accounting for merely 10% of the surveyed visitors.

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The report covers the main features of the pie chart and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, particularly regarding the breakdown of theme park visitors. For example, the report states that 'Blackpool pleasure beach remains the major contributor, at 47%', which is not supported by the visual information provided. Also, the report mentions that 'chessington world of adventures and legoland windsor contributes the least, accounting for merely 10% of the surveyed visitors', but the percentage for Chessington is not specified in the visual. To improve, ensure that all data reported is accurate and directly derived from the visual. Also, focus on providing a more balanced overview that includes all key data points without misrepresenting any information. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate organization, generally presenting information in a logical sequence. However, the flow could be improved with better transitions between paragraphs and ideas. The second paragraph mentions 'blackpool pleasure beach' which is not accurate based on the pie chart. The final sentence is a bit confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary that is generally appropriate for the task. However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise. For example, 'various types of tourist attraction places' could be simplified to 'types of tourist attractions'. Consider using synonyms to enhance the richness of the language and avoid repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are grammatical errors present that affect the clarity and accuracy of the writing. For example, 'make up the majority of tourist attractions place' should be 'make up the majority of tourist attraction places' or 'account for the majority of tourist attraction visits'. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, article usage, and correct tense usage to improve grammatical accuracy.

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