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Band 7+: The chart gives information about the number and purposes of trips made by men and women in one year in a certain European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image features a horizontal bar chart with a horizontal numerical axis ranging from 0 to 350, marked in increments of 50 at 0, 50, 100, 150, 200, 250, 300, and 350. The vertical axis lists five categories from top to bottom: "Day trip", "Sports/ Entertainment", "Visiting friends", "Shopping", and "Travelling to work". A legend defines two categories: "Women" (hollow bars) and "Men" (filled bars). Under "Day trip", the bar for Women reaches approximately 25 and for Men reaches approximately 38. Under "Sports/ Entertainment", the bar for Women reaches approximately 132 and for Men reaches approximately 145. Under "Visiting friends", the bar for Women extends to approximately 210 and for Men extends to approximately 195. Under "Shopping", the bar for Women reaches approximately 280 and for Men reaches approximately 195. Under "Travelling to work", the bar for Women reaches approximately 212 and for Men extends to approximately 332.

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The given bar graph compares the purposes of trips in a european country in one year between men and women.

Overall, travelling to work is the highest purpose trip for men, while the day trip is the lowest, and it was the same result for women. Meanwhile, the most purpose of trips for women was shopping.

Looking first at the men’s purposes, the number of travelling to work trips stood at 330, which was the highest objective, followed by visiting friends and shopping, both recorded almost 190 trips. Furthermore, the entertainment travelling such as sports reached 140 trips.

Turning to the purposes of women, shopping registered 280 trips, while visiting friends and travelling to work had the same figures, with 220 trips. Moreover, the number of sport and entertainment trips was 130.

Word Count: 132

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

trips: 7

travelling: 4

purposes: 3

women: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the chart and makes relevant comparisons between men and women. The overall trend is identified, and key data points are presented. However, there are a few minor inaccuracies (e.g., women's travelling to work is stated as 220, but it should be around 212; men's visiting friends and shopping are both stated as 190, but they are approximately 195). Additionally, the report omits the day trip data for both genders, which is a notable feature. To improve, ensure all categories are mentioned and double-check figures for precision. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and separate paragraphs for men and women. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas and comparisons between the two groups. For example, explicitly contrasting the figures for men and women in each category would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and generally accurate, with some good use of synonyms (e.g., 'purposes', 'objectives', 'figures'). However, there is room for more sophisticated and varied lexical choices. Phrases like 'the most purpose of trips' could be rephrased to 'the most common purpose' or 'the primary reason for trips' to sound more natural. Additionally, using a wider range of expressions for describing data (e.g., 'accounted for', 'constituted', 'represented') would enhance the lexical resource. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate with a good range of sentence structures. There are minor issues, such as the missing article in 'a european country' (should be 'a European country') and the phrase 'the most purpose of trips' which is slightly awkward. Overall, the report demonstrates strong grammatical control, but a few small errors and phrasing improvements could be made to reach full accuracy.

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Band 7+: The chart gives information about the number and purposes of trips made by men and women in one year in a certain European country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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