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Band 5+: The chart shows numbers of UK tourists visiting two countries from 2010 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The image depicts a bar chart comparing the number of UK tourists visiting Thailand and Greece (in millions) from 2010 to 2013. In 2010, Thailand had approximately 3.3 million visitors, and Greece had about 2.5 million. In 2011, Thailand had around 3.5 million visitors, and Greece peaked at roughly 4.4 million. In 2012, Thailand again had approximately 3.3 million visitors, while Greece saw a decline to about 2 million. In 2013, Thailand reached approximately 4 million visitors, and Greece had about 3 million.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of uk tourists visiting Thailand and greece between 2010 to 2013

Overall, Thailand showed an initial decline before increasing steadily, whilst Greece fluctuated througouth the four year period.

At the beginning of the period, the number of uk tourists visiting Thailand stood at 3.5 million. which was marginally higher than the figure for greece in year 2010, However this figure fell to 3 million, making it lower than that for Greece, it then increased to 3.5 million in 2012 before eaching a peak of 4 million in 2013. This was the highest period visition Thailand during this period.

The number of uk toursits visiting greece bagan at 2.5 million in 2010. it then rose to 4.5 million un year 2011 before dropping sharply to almost 2 million in the following year. This was the lowest figure compared to thailand. lastly it climbed up to 3 million making it lower than that figure for Greece.

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greece: 6

thailand: 5

figure: 4

number: 3

visiting: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task and provides a clear overview of the trends. It successfully identifies the key fluctuations for both countries. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data reporting (for example, stating Thailand started at 3.5 million instead of 3.3 million, and concluding that the 2013 figure for Greece was lower than the figure for Greece itself). Additionally, there are some typographical errors and grammatical inconsistencies that affect the flow. To improve, ensure that data points are cross-checked carefully against the visual information and focus on logical sentence structures when making comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is significantly hindered by punctuation errors. There are several instances of 'comma splices' (joining two independent sentences with only a comma) and fragments (sentences starting with 'which' or 'it' that are not properly connected). To improve, ensure that every sentence is a complete thought and use appropriate linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Subsequently', 'Following this') to guide the reader through the comparisons.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'peaked', 'dropped sharply'), but there are several spelling errors ('througouth', 'eaching', 'visition', 'toursits', 'bagan', 'un') and capitalization issues ('uk', 'greece', 'thailand'). Additionally, there is a confusing error in the final sentence where the student compares Greece to Greece ('lower than that figure for Greece'). Aim for higher precision in word choice and ensure all proper nouns are capitalized to meet academic standards.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical accuracy is a major area for improvement. The report suffers from frequent errors in sentence structure, particularly regarding how clauses are joined. There are issues with capitalization at the start of sentences and for proper nouns. The use of prepositions is also inconsistent (e.g., 'between 2010 to 2013' should be 'between 2010 and 2013' or 'from 2010 to 2013'). Focus on mastering basic sentence boundaries and the correct use of relative clauses to improve the overall flow and accuracy.

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