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Band 4+: The chart shows requests for information at a Tourist office in the United Kingdom. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons with relevant.

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The image contains a line graph depicting the frequency of three types of communication— in person, by letter/email, and by telephone— over six months from January to June. In January, in person stands at 450, by letter/email at 800, and by telephone at 900. In February, in person rises to 600, by letter/email remains 700, and by telephone drops to 700. In March, in person increases to 1000, by letter/email slightly falls to 600, and by telephone moves upward to 1000. In April, in person surges to 1400, by letter/email drops to 500, and by telephone peaks at 1200. In May, in person continues upward to 1600, by letter/email reduces further to 400, and by telephone slightly decreases to 1400. In June, in person peaks at 1900, by letter/email dips to 400, and by telephone garners 1600. All values are recorded monthly, showcasing trends in communication methods.

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The line graph illustrates the data about the Tourism office in the United Kingdom.

Overall,the informaton reveal considerable differences between the different indicators,while two lines have an identical direction and occupy more leading position than abandouned one.The lines began from almost seems place, but after every position had a distinguishing indicators.Every lines started in January and finished in June.

Looking at the most leading positions were “In person” and “By telephone” sections.Turning at the “In person” graph, began with the low position- almost 400 and rocketed gradually,after considerable jump, the line reached a peak approximately 1900. Meanwhile, the second leading position are a “By telephone” section,compared with first one,the second position had the most higher start place at 900,but after beginig the line declined slightly,the next it rosed and remained stable on the 1000 data information.After the indicators sharply surge and finished on 1600.

In contrast, the lowest position are a “‘By letter/email” and started from the higher position than that of the poll’s leading choice itself, after slowly fell, but reached the March,the indicators plummeted rapidly and had the May,the line stabilize until June.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in the three communication methods over the six-month period. It identifies the overall increase in 'in person' and 'by telephone' and the decrease in 'by letter/email', which are key features. However, there are some inaccuracies and unclear expressions (e.g., 'abandouned one', 'almost seems place', 'the poll's leading choice itself') that detract from clarity. The data is not always precise (e.g., 'began with the low position- almost 400' vs. 450, and the description of the telephone trend is somewhat confusing). To improve, focus on clearer, more accurate data reporting and use more precise language to describe trends and comparisons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to organize information into paragraphs, but the overall structure is unclear and the message is difficult to follow. The introduction is too brief and does not clearly paraphrase the task. The overview is vague and does not effectively summarize the main trends. The body paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and the progression of ideas is confusing. Cohesive devices are used inaccurately (e.g., 'Meanwhile', 'In contrast') and the relationships between sentences are often unclear. The report would benefit from a clearer structure: an introduction, an overview of main trends, and paragraphs that logically group the data (e.g., one for in-person and telephone, one for letter/email).

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, with some attempts at more sophisticated words (e.g., 'rocketed', 'plummeted', 'surge') but these are often used inaccurately or inappropriately. There are frequent errors in word choice and collocation (e.g., 'abandouned one', 'poll's leading choice', 'the most higher start place'). The report lacks the precise and natural language needed to describe trends effectively. To improve, focus on using a wider range of accurate vocabulary for describing changes (e.g., 'increase steadily', 'decline gradually', 'reach a peak') and ensure that words are used correctly in context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'the informaton reveal', 'Every lines started'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'began from almost seems place', 'the line declined slightly, the next it rosed'), and inconsistent tense usage. Punctuation is often missing or incorrect, and sentence structures are frequently incomplete or run-on. The range of grammatical structures is very limited, with little evidence of complex sentences used accurately. To improve, focus on writing clear, simple sentences with correct grammar, and gradually incorporate more complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, conditionals) as accuracy improves.

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