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Band 7+: The chart shows requests for information at a tourist office in the United Kingdom from January to June. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents a line graph with a vertical axis ranging from 0 to 2000 in intervals of 200, a horizontal axis listing months from Jan to Jun, and a legend featuring three categories: in person, by letter/email, and by telephone. For in person, the data points are approximately 450 in Jan, 600 in Feb, 800 in Mar, 1250 in Apr, 1550 in May, and 1900 in Jun. For by letter/email, the data points are approximately 750 in Jan, 700 in Feb, 700 in Mar, 550 in Apr, 350 in May, and 350 in Jun. For by telephone, the data points are approximately 900 in Jan, 800 in Feb, 1000 in Mar, 1000 in Apr, 1400 in May, and 1600 in Jun.

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The line graph illustrates the number of requests for information at a tourist office in the UK over the last six months.

Overall, despite fluctuations, figures for requesting information in person and by telephone rose gradually over the whole period. By contrast, the use of letters for this purpose was less common.

It is clear that requests for information through mobile communication services were the most successful at the start with about 900 requests. Later, it saw fluctuations from January to March and remained unchanged until April. However, ultimately they achieved significant growth with the mark of 1600 calls. The requests in person, as opposed, started at the lowest point, with just a little more than 400 requests. Unlike the previous trend, this type of requests experienced constant growth during the period from January to June.

The last way of requesting information in the UK, by letter or email, witnessed a slight decline for the first three months and then plunged for the next three months. Finally, the figures stabilised just under 400 and continued this trend for the rest of the given period.

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main trends and providing an overview. It covers all three categories and includes relevant data. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that could be improved. For instance, 'mobile communication services' is an imprecise term for 'telephone', and the description of the letter/email trend is slightly inaccurate (it actually declined steadily, not 'plunged' after three months). The report would benefit from clearer and more precise language, as well as a more accurate representation of the data trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction and overview. The main trends are presented logically, and the use of paragraphs helps to separate different aspects of the data. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, the transition from the second paragraph to the third could be smoother, and the use of referencing (e.g., 'this type of requests') could be more precise. Overall, the message is easy to follow, but there is room for more sophisticated cohesion.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a good range of vocabulary related to trends (e.g., 'rose gradually', 'decline', 'plunged', 'stabilised') and demonstrates flexibility in describing data. However, there are some inaccuracies and less natural phrasings, such as 'mobile communication services' (which is not an appropriate term for 'telephone') and 'the mark of 1600 calls' (which could be more naturally expressed as 'reached 1600'). The phrase 'as opposed' is also awkward. To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural word choices, and avoid using overly complex or incorrect terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are, however, a few minor errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. For example, 'it saw fluctuations' could be improved to 'there were fluctuations', and 'the figures stabilised just under 400 and continued this trend' could be more clearly expressed. The phrase 'with the mark of 1600 calls' is also grammatically awkward. Overall, the grammar is mostly accurate, but there are minor issues that prevent it from being fully controlled.

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