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Band 5+: The chart shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in selected countries. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given.

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The image shows mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in six countries: in Canada, 38 mobiles and 62 landlines; in US, 48 mobiles and 68 landlines; in Germany, 70 mobiles and 60 landlines; in Denmark, 82 mobiles and 90 landlines; in UK, 85 mobiles and 58 landlines; in Sweden, 88 mobiles and 68 landlines; in Italy, 90 mobiles and 42 landlines.

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The given bar chart shows the information about landlines & Mobile phones user per 100 citizen in 7 different countries.

Overall, the use of mobile is prominent in all European countries except for Denmark as land lines is used more there. Likewise, UK is the only English speaking country who prefer land lines, but in US & Canada usage of mobile is more.

From the chart it is evident that highest mobile using country is Italy with 90 users followed by Sweden whereas, Canada has least amount of mobile users only about 38 per 100 people.

In the case of land lines, Danish were using the most about 89 per 100 people, however, they also used mobile at almost same amount as land lines. In contrast, Italians were consuming land lines least with ony 41 out of 100 citizen. On an average, Canada, US and Germany has wired phones consumer of around 60 out of 100.

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mobile: 6

lines: 5

about: 3

canada: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides an overview, but it contains some inaccuracies and omissions. The overall trend is mentioned, but the statement about the UK preferring landlines is incorrect based on the data (UK has 85 mobiles vs 58 landlines). Additionally, the report omits specific data for some countries (e.g., Germany, Denmark, Sweden) and includes minor numerical inaccuracies (e.g., Denmark landlines '89' instead of 90, Italy landlines '41' instead of 42). The structure is clear, but the language could be more precise and formal. To improve, ensure all key data points are accurately reported and avoid making incorrect generalizations.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the logical flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear comparisons. The overview is somewhat confusing, especially the statement about the UK being the only English-speaking country preferring landlines, which contradicts the data. To improve coherence, ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea and that transitions between sentences and paragraphs are smooth. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'while') more effectively to guide the reader. Also, avoid making unsupported or inaccurate generalizations in the overview.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary related to the topic (e.g., 'prominent', 'evident', 'consuming'), but there are several instances of imprecise or informal word choices (e.g., 'user per 100 citizen', 'wired phones consumer', 'ony'). To achieve a higher score, use a wider range of precise and formal vocabulary, such as 'subscribers', 'residents', 'fixed-line telephones', and 'mobile phone penetration'. Avoid informal contractions and ensure that terms are used consistently (e.g., 'mobile phones' vs. 'mobile'). Also, pay attention to collocations (e.g., 'the highest number of mobile users' instead of 'highest mobile using country').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity and accuracy. Examples include subject-verb agreement errors ('land lines is used'), incorrect pluralization ('citizen' instead of 'citizens'), and misspellings ('ony' for 'only'). There are also issues with articles and prepositions (e.g., 'the use of mobile is prominent' should be 'the use of mobile phones is prominent'). To improve, focus on writing grammatically correct sentences with proper punctuation. Use a variety of sentence structures, including complex sentences, but ensure they are error-free. Proofreading carefully can help eliminate basic errors and improve overall accuracy.

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