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Band 4+: The charts below give information about attendance at entertainment venues and admission prices to those venues in 2009.

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The image consists of two sections; the upper section is a horizontal bar graph labeled "Attendance at entertainment venues, 2009," with bars representing Sports at 1100 thousand, Theme Parks at 500 thousand, and Cinemas at 1000 thousand No. of admissions. The lower section is a table with two columns, "Event" and "2009 Admission Price," subdivided into "1 Ticket" and "Family Ticket (4 people)." The listed events and corresponding prices are: Football Game - AFL at $75 and $298, Football Game - NRL at $73 and $290, Football Game - NRU at $71 and $280, Theme Parks at $70 and $210, Basketball Game at $34 and $135, Cricket Game at $24 and $80, and Cinema at $15 and $55.

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The above chart and bar graph shows the comparison between prices and attendance at entertainment places by 2009.

The most expensive ticket for the football event such as AFL ,at $75 due it’s expensiveness the least numbers of tickets has been sold out by 2009 where all prices for admission was not so cheap and ,consequently the rates are $73 for Football game (NRL) ,and $71 for Football game (NRU) ,and as well as the also the money for entrance for the family are also have the high amount of rates .Due to this number of admissions were held in 2009 are only 180 and this number is less among all the numbers of admissions.

The theme park rates are just then sports and which was $70,and the numbers of admissions took in 2009 were 380, basketball game has $34,and cricket games has $24 and finally the most cheapest rate of cinema was just $15.

Overall,the most numbers of admissions was taken in the cinema it has affordable rates of tickets and as well as there are very few numbers of admissions due to its high rate of tickets.

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The report attempts to address the task, but there are significant issues with accuracy and clarity. The data is misinterpreted in several places, and the writing is difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data from the chart and table, and work on improving sentence structure and clarity.

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The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the comparisons between attendance and admission prices. Paragraphing is not effectively used to separate different aspects of the data. To improve, focus on structuring the report with a clear introduction, body paragraphs that each address a specific aspect of the data (e.g., sports, theme parks, cinemas), and a concise conclusion. Use cohesive devices (e.g., conjunctions, pronouns, synonyms) to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

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The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward sentence structures. These errors significantly impact the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing simple and clear sentences, and gradually incorporate more complex structures as your grammar skills improve. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors.

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