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Band 7+: The charts below give information about the percentage of energy produced from different sources in Country X in 2000 and 2020. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts, for the year 2000 and the year 2020, and a table summarizing key changes between these years for five energy sources. For the year 2000, the source distribution was Coal 45%, Natural gas 25%, Nuclear 20%, Renewable 5%, and Other 5%. For the year 2020, the distribution was Coal 20%, Natural gas 30%, Nuclear 15%, Renewable 30%, and Other 5%. The table of key changes from 2000 to 2020 shows: Coal -25pp, Natural gas +5pp, Nuclear -5pp, Renewable +25pp, and Other 0pp.

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The supplied table reveals the electricity generated from coal, natural gas, oil, nuclear, and renewables in 2000 and 2020.

Overall, the amount of electricity generated varied considerably across the energy sources in 2000 and 2020. Electricity generated from coal accounted for the largest proportion, yet decreased significantly to let natural gas take the lead. In contrast, renewable sources represented the smallest share in 2000, and in 2020, nuclear sources. The remaining sources stood at intermediate positions.

After meticulous consideration, coal stood at 42% as the leading source in 2000, yet experienced a fundamental downward move. Meanwhile, oil slightly decreased to 15%. By contrast, natural gas increased its share in electricity generation from 22% to 30%, becoming the leading source in 2020. Also, nuclear sources stood at 10% and experienced a similar pattern, reaching 12%. In 2000, renewable sources occupied the last position but, by 2020, underwent a considerable shift of 10% to account for 18%. At the end of the period, nuclear made up the smallest proportion at only 12%.

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electricity: 4

nuclear: 4

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends and making some comparisons. However, there are several inaccuracies in the data (e.g., coal at 42% instead of 45%, oil mentioned though not in the visual, renewable at 18% instead of 30%, nuclear at 12% instead of 15%). The overall structure is clear, but the inclusion of incorrect figures detracts from the task achievement. To improve, ensure all data is accurately reported and focus on the most significant changes, such as the rise in renewables and the decline in coal.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically organized with a clear overall statement and a second paragraph detailing specific data. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas and data points. For instance, transitions like 'In contrast' and 'Meanwhile' are used, but the progression from one source to another could be smoother. Additionally, the final sentence about nuclear being the smallest proportion in 2020 could be better integrated into the overall comparison. Consider using more varied linking phrases and ensuring each paragraph has a clear central focus.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally appropriate and shows some flexibility (e.g., 'accounted for', 'experienced a fundamental downward move', 'undergone a considerable shift'). However, there is room for more precise and varied language. For example, 'stood at' is repeated, and phrases like 'fundamental downward move' could be more natural (e.g., 'significant decrease'). Additionally, the report could benefit from more sophisticated terms related to trends (e.g., 'surge', 'plunge', 'remained stable') and more precise descriptions of proportions. Overall, the lexical range is adequate but not fully developed.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammar is largely accurate, with a good range of sentence structures, including complex sentences and appropriate use of tenses. There are no significant errors that impede understanding. The report demonstrates control over grammatical structures, though there is slight repetition in sentence patterns (e.g., 'stood at' and 'experienced'). To achieve a higher score, vary sentence openings and use more complex structures, such as passive voice or conditional forms, where appropriate. Overall, the grammar is strong and contributes to clarity.

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