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Band 7+: THE CHARTS BELOW GIVE INFORMATION ABOUT WEEKLY RENT FOR HOUSES AND APARTMENTS IN 4 AUSTRALIAN CITIES IN 2016 AND 2017.

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The image displays two bar charts comparing average weekly rents. For houses in 2016-2017: Sydney - 2016: $560; 2017: $600; Hobart - 2016: $320; 2017: $360; Darwin - 2016: $380; 2017: $400; Perth - 2016: $350; 2017: $350. For apartments in 2016-2017: Sydney - 2016: $450; 2017: $500; Hobart - 2016: $200; 2017: $240; Darwin - 2016: $320; 2017: $350; Perth - 2016: $300; 2017: $330.

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The bar charts show the average weekly rent for houses and apartments in four Australian cities, namely Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane and Perth, in 2016 and 2017.

Overall, Sydney had the highest rental prices, while Perth generally had the lowest. House rents increased in all four cities. For apartments, rents also rose in Sydney, Melbourne and Perth, but there was a small decrease in Brisbane.

In 2016, the average weekly rent for a house in Sydney was $550, and this increased to $580 in 2017. Melbourne had the second-highest figures, rising from $400 to $430. In Brisbane, house rent went up slightly from $380 to $390. Perth had the lowest house rents, at $350 in 2016 and $360 in 2017.

Looking at apartments, Sydney was again the most expensive city. The average rent increased from $500 to $530. In Melbourne, it rose considerably from $370 to $410. In contrast, apartment rent in Brisbane fell slightly, from $360 to $350. Perth had the lowest apartment rents in 2016, at $320, but this figure increased to $330 in 2017.

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sydney: 5

perth: 5

melbourne: 4

house: 4

rents: 4

increased: 4

average: 3

apartments: 3

brisbane: 3

lowest: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by comparing weekly rents for houses and apartments across four cities, but it contains significant inaccuracies. The cities mentioned (Melbourne, Brisbane) do not match the visual data (Hobart, Darwin), and the figures provided for Sydney, Perth, and other cities are incorrect. The overall trend statement is also inaccurate, as it claims house rents increased in all four cities, but the data shows Perth remained unchanged. To improve, ensure the report accurately reflects the visual information, including correct city names and data values, and provide a clear overview of the main trends.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. It begins with a clear introduction, provides an overall summary, and then details the data for houses and apartments in separate paragraphs. The use of cohesive devices is natural and effective. To achieve a perfect score, ensure that the overall trend statement is fully accurate and that paragraphing is consistently logical. Minor lapses, such as a slight mismatch in the overview, are minimal.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and varied, with good use of terms like 'average weekly rent,' 'increased,' 'rose,' 'fell slightly,' and 'considerably.' The report demonstrates a good range of lexical items and accurate usage. To reach a band 9, you could incorporate more sophisticated and precise vocabulary, such as 'witnessed a surge' or 'experienced a marginal decline,' and ensure all data descriptions are perfectly aligned with the visual information. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Sentences are varied and complex, and punctuation is accurate throughout. There are no noticeable grammar errors. This aspect is handled excellently.

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