Multiple Graphs

Band 5+: The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

See all user-written answers on this topic

Image for topic: The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Our system will evaluate the answer based on this AI-generated description.

The image depicts two bar charts comparing US honey-bee colonies and honey production from 1970 to 2010. The left chart shows bee colonies: 1970 at 4 million, 1980 at 4.2 million, 1990 at 3.5 million, 2000 at 2.4 million, and 2010 at 1.8 million. The right chart displays honey production: 1970 at 130,000 tons, 1980 at 110,000 tons, 1990 at 100,000 tons, 2000 at 90,000 tons, and 2010 at 70,000 tons.

Given the complexity of the image, the above description may not be entirely accurate.

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.

The charts give information about honey-bee colonies and the production of honey in the USA. I will examine the charts in this report.

Firstly, The first chart illustrates the honey-bee colonies in the USA from 1970-2010. In 1970, numbers of honey-bee colonies was 4 million. Honey-bee colonies increased slightly from 4 million to 4.2 million. Bee population decreased moderately by 0.8 million in 1990. Then the number of bees went down to 2.6 million in 2000. After that the numbers of bee colonies fell moderately from 2.6 million to 1.8 million in 2010.

In addition, the second chart gives information about honey production between 1970-2010 in the United States. In 1970, honey production was 130.000 tons in the USA. The following bar shows 1980. In this year the production of honey went down moderately by 20.000 tons.After that the honey production increased a small amount from 110.000 to 120.000 in 1990. In 2000, the honey production fell moderately by 20.000. Lastly, the production of honey, went down sharply to 70.000 in 2010.

Overall, In 1980 the number of colonies increased. In contrast, the honey production decreased in 1980. This information shows opposite trend. However the others years have same trends. The most significant information is the fall in honey production per bee colony.

Word Count: 227

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

honey: 10

production: 10

colonies: 7

million: 7

information: 5

honey-bee: 5

moderately: 4

charts: 3

about: 3

increased: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by describing both charts and providing an overview. You have successfully identified the general trends and made some comparisons between the two datasets. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reporting (for example, stating honey production increased in 1990 when the visual description indicates a decrease) and some repetitive sentence structures. To improve, try to use a wider variety of cohesive devices and more sophisticated vocabulary to describe trends (e.g., 'fluctuated', 'declined steadily', 'reached a low of'). Additionally, ensure that your data descriptions are strictly accurate to the provided information.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and an overview. However, the cohesion is somewhat mechanical. The use of transition signals like 'Firstly', 'In addition', and 'After that' is repetitive and basic. To improve, try to use more sophisticated linking devices and vary your sentence structures to connect ideas more fluidly. Additionally, the introduction includes a sentence ('I will examine the charts in this report') which is unnecessary in Task 1; you should focus on paraphrasing the prompt rather than stating your intention.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is functional but quite limited and repetitive. Words like 'went down', 'increased', and 'fell' are used frequently. To reach a higher band, aim to use a wider range of synonyms for change (e.g., 'declined', 'plummeted', 'dipped', 'rose marginally') and more precise academic collocations. Be careful with the use of 'numbers of honey-bee colonies was'; it should be 'the number of... was' or 'the numbers... were'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical inaccuracies that affect the flow of the report. Issues include subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'numbers... was'), punctuation errors (e.g., 'Firstly, The first chart'), and the incorrect use of periods instead of commas in large numbers (e.g., '130.000' should be '130,000'). While the meaning is generally clear, the sentence structures are mostly simple. To improve, practice using complex sentence structures, such as combining observations using relative clauses (e.g., 'The number of colonies, which stood at 4 million in 1970, rose slightly to...') or subordinating conjunctions.

Answers On The Same Topic:

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar charts give information about the quantity of honey-bee colonies, alongside how much honey has been produced in the US, over a 40-year period, starting from 1970. Overall, it is evident that both honey-bee colonies and honey put out generally witnessed a downward trend over the time frame, despite certain fluctuations. Regarding honey-bee colonies, […]

Band 4+

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two bar charts provide a comparative analysis of honey-bee colonies and honey production in the United States over a four-decade span from 1970 to 2010. It is evident that both the number of honey-bee colonies and honey production witnessed a marked decline during this period, despite experiencing fluctuations in certain years. In 1970, the […]

Band 9

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar charts illustrate the number of honey-bee colonies and the amount of honey produced in the United States from 1970 to 2010. Overall, the number of honey-bee colonies and honey production showed different patterns in the first 20 years of the period. However, both figures experienced a dramatic decline over the final 20 years. […]

Band 8+

See All

the graphs below show the age of visitors from the UK to spanish between 1983 and 2003

The two pie charts compare the age distribution of visitors from UK to Spain in 1983 and 2003 Overall, people aged 34-54 accounted for the largest proportion of visitors in the both of years, although their share declined considerably over the period. By contrast, the percentages of younger adults and older tourists increased, while proportion […]

Band 7+

1. The Charts below show what US graduates and postgraduates who did not seek full time employment did after leaving school in 2010

The provided bar charts compare the destinations of graduates and postgraduates who did not enter full-time employment after leaving college in the UK in 2008. Overall, it is clear that the huge number of graduates and postgraduates either continued their study or took part-time jobs, while relatively few did voluntary work or remained unemployed. In […]

Band 6+

See All

Band 5+: The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US. >> Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Other Topics:

The line graph shows the change in the amount of electricity used during a day in two seasons and the pie chart indicates the different uses of electricity. Describe the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

the graphs below show the age of visitors from the UK to spanish between 1983 and 2003

1. The Charts below show what US graduates and postgraduates who did not seek full time employment did after leaving school in 2010

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium