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Band 5+: The charts below show that UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting and the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The image contains two bar charts detailing the destinations of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008, excluding full-time work. The first chart represents UK graduates: 17,735 in part-time work, 3,500 in voluntary work, 29,665 in further study, and 16,235 unemployed. The second chart represents UK postgraduates: 2,535 in part-time work, 345 in voluntary work, 2,725 in further study, and 1,625 unemployed.

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The bar charts represent total number of both graduate and postgraduate students who did not get employeed and illustate their alternative no work destinations.

Overall and excluding the full time employed graduates ,The number of garduated students outreached the number of postgraduate students . Most graduate students perfered to proceed futher studies instead of getting a job.In top of that, less students from both categories seeked voulantering opportunites.

The majority of graduate students a counting for above 29 thousends decided to complete the further studies , the next big portion filled a part time job .alomst 16,000 graduate student are unemployed.

For postgradute students, same trend is observed.as 27,725 out of the total proceeded futher education,and slightly less postgraduate enrolled in a part time job, whearse,1,625 student remained unemployed.a very small portion has undertaken a voulantiring job.

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The report covers the main features of the charts and makes relevant comparisons. There are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., '27,725' should be '2,725'). To improve, ensure data accuracy and vary sentence structure more to enhance readability. Also, consider adding a more comprehensive overview in the introduction. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information into paragraphs, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt, affecting the overall coherence. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas and improve the logical progression of information. For example, using phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' can help to connect related points.

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The vocabulary used is somewhat limited and contains inaccuracies ('employeed,' 'garduated,' 'outreached,' 'perfered,' 'voulantering'). Expanding your vocabulary and ensuring correct spelling and usage would enhance the clarity and precision of your report. Focus on using synonyms and varied language to describe the data.

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The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'The majority of graduate students a counting for above 29 thousends' is grammatically incorrect. Reviewing basic grammar rules and practicing sentence construction would significantly improve the accuracy of your writing. Pay attention to punctuation as well.

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Band 5+: The charts below show that UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting and the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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