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Band 6+: The charts below show the consumption of water for different purposes and the residential water use in Australia for the year 2004.

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The image presents a pie chart and a bar graph depicting water consumption in Australia for 2004. In the pie chart, water usage is divided as follows: Residential (House) 57%, Residential (Apartments) 11%, Industry 10%, Business 6%, Government 3%, Others 5%, with a segment labeled not specified but visually indicated as remaining 8%. The bar graph details residential water use: Bathroom 27%, Toilet 20%, Washing clothes 15%, Kitchen 10%, Garden 35%.

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The pie chart presents the use of water in Australia in 2004 for different goals. At the same time the diagram gives clear information about the consumption for houses.

Overall, all results are presented in percentages. There are different sectors, such as: government, residential (house), residential (apartments), industry, business, and others. The most significant role plays the residential (house) sector. There is a separate part about specific household chores that use the most water. What is more, the least active user that is on the list is the government.

The residential, especially house sector is the largest consumer of water, accounting for more than half of the total (57%). About 27% is using water for the bathroom, around 26% for the garden, almost 20% for washing clothes, around 15% for the toilet, and about 10% for the kitchen.

The second place is the residential (apartments) sector (13%). However industry and business parts have almost the same indicators (11% and 10%). Government do not consumes big amount of water (only 6%) and the other (3%)

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residential: 5

about: 4

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Task Response

The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions. The description of the bar graph lacks precision, and some data is misinterpreted (e.g., the percentage for residential apartments and the breakdown of household water use). To improve, focus on accurately representing the data and ensuring all key features are addressed with correct figures.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize information, but the flow could be improved. The introduction is somewhat disjointed, and the connection between the pie chart and bar graph descriptions isn't seamless. Paragraphing is present, but the ideas within paragraphs could be more tightly linked. Consider using transition words and phrases to guide the reader and create a smoother narrative.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there's room for greater precision and variety. Some phrases are a bit generic (e.g., 'gives clear information,' 'most significant role'). Try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language related to water consumption and percentages. For instance, instead of 'do not consumes big amount of water,' you could say 'consumes the smallest proportion of water.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. Sentence structure is relatively simple, and there are instances of incorrect verb usage and awkward phrasing. For example, 'About 27% is using water for the bathroom' could be improved to 'Approximately 27% of residential water is used in the bathroom.' Focus on using a wider range of grammatical structures and ensuring accuracy in verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and article usage.

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