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Band 5+: The charts below show the density of people in 2003, and the change of population from 2003 to 2005.

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The image consists of two graphs: the first graph, titled "The number of people per square km in 6 countries in 2003," shows the population density in six countries, with Australia at 2, Canada at 3, Japan at 338, Italy at 191, Sweden at 20, and the United Kingdom at 243 people per square km. The second graph, titled "The percentage change in population from 2003 to 2005," shows changes in population size over two years. Australia has an increase of 1.42%, Canada 1.06%, Japan 0.35%, Italy 0.11%, Sweden -0.1%, and the United Kingdom 0.25%.

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The provided bar and bar charts display data on the number of people per square km in 6 countries in 2003 and the percentage change in population from 2003 to 2005.

Overall, it can be seen that the highest figures were recorded for Japan and Australia, while Canada as well as Sweden accounted for the lowest rates.

According to the bar chart, the number of people per square km in 6 countries in 2003 were 3 in Australia. It stable to 3 in Canada. Meanwhile, people per square km were highest 330 in Japan, which dramatically decreased to 191 in Italy. In addition, in 6 countries in 2003 people per square km were 20, and it significantly rose to 243 in United kingdom.

In terms of the remaining bar chart, there was a decrease of 0.36% the percentage change in population from 1.42% to 1.06% between 2003 and 2005. Moreover, the figure for the population fell form 0.35% in Japan to 0.11% in Italy over 2 years. Furthermore, between Sweden and United kingdom population enhanced from -0.1% to 0.25 %.

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people: 4

square: 4

population: 4

countries: 3

japan: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies and misinterpretations of the data. It incorrectly states that Australia and Canada have the highest figures, when in fact they have the lowest population densities. The data for Japan and Italy are also misrepresented, and the description of the second chart is confusing and contains errors (e.g., describing a decrease from 1.42% to 1.06% as a change between countries rather than between Australia and Canada). The report lacks a clear overview and fails to accurately summarize the main trends. To improve, focus on accurately describing the data, providing a clear overall summary, and ensuring that all figures are correctly attributed to the correct countries.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and an overview, but the body paragraphs lack logical organization and clear progression. The data is presented in a somewhat random order, and the connection between the two charts is not clearly established. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'Meanwhile', 'In addition', 'Moreover' are used without clear logical links). The paragraphing is not effectively managed, as the second paragraph mixes data from both charts without a clear focus. To improve, organize the report by chart or by clear categories (e.g., highest, middle, lowest), and use a range of linking words and referencing to create a smoother flow.

Lexical Resource

The report uses some appropriate vocabulary for describing data (e.g., 'recorded', 'accounted for', 'decreased', 'rose'), but the range is limited and there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings. For example, 'It stable to 3' is incorrect, and 'people per square km were highest 330' is unnatural. The phrase 'the percentage change in population' is repeated verbatim from the task, and there is little attempt to paraphrase. To improve, use a wider variety of synonyms and more precise language (e.g., 'stood at', 'peaked at', 'experienced a rise'), and ensure that all expressions are used correctly and naturally. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that impede clarity. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'the number ... were'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'It stable to 3'), and missing articles (e.g., 'in United kingdom'). There are also spelling errors (e.g., 'form' instead of 'from') and incorrect use of prepositions. The range of grammatical structures is limited, with mostly simple sentences and some awkward attempts at complex structures. To improve, focus on basic grammar accuracy, use a variety of sentence structures (e.g., complex and compound sentences), and proofread carefully to eliminate errors.

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