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Band 6+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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The image contains two graphs related to Japanese tourism. The first graph, titled "Japanese tourist traveling abroad," shows the number of tourists in millions from 1985 to 1996. The values start at approximately 5 million in 1985 and steadily increase each year, reaching approximately 16 million by 1996. The second graph, titled "Australia's share of Japan's tourist market," illustrates the percentage from 1985 to 1996. Starting at around 2% in 1985, the percentage fluctuates slightly but shows an overall upward trend, reaching approximately 6% by 1996.

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The data given provides information of Japanese travelers going outside the country in a decade from 1985 to 1995 and their preference of Australia in the same period.

Overview of the statistics shows Japanese visitors going abroad rose gradually from 1985 to 1995 except in 1991 where it had a slight dip. The percentage of passengers choosing Australia as their destination also had a dramatic rise in that period.

People holidaying foreign countries were almost 5 million in 1985 and steadily increased over the decade to 1.5 times. In the period of 1990 and 1991, travel saw a minute decrease by 1 million.

The Australian share of the Japanese people had a significant upward trajectory from having a 2 percent proportion in start of the period to 6 percent at the end. The percentage stake had a downfall in 1989, where it fell by almost 1 percent. The highest portion of passengers were seen in 1994, which were higher than the final share of 1995.

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Task Response

6.5

The report provides a general overview of the information presented in the charts, but there are some inaccuracies and omissions in the data interpretation. The report should focus more on specific data trends and comparisons between the two graphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is mostly coherent and organized, with a clear introduction and conclusion. However, there are some issues with paragraphing and the flow of information. The report could benefit from better transitions between ideas.

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

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There is a variety of sentence structures used in the report, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward constructions that affect clarity. More attention to grammar and sentence fluency is needed.

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Band 6+: The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

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