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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents two bar charts on the employment percentage of Australian men and women in the age groups 15-19, 25-54, and 60-64 for 1984, 2001, and 2014. Men's employment in 1984 was 62% (15-19), 80% (25-54), and 40% (60-64); in 2001, 60%, 82%, and 42%; and in 2014, 52%, 84%, and 62%. Women's employment in 1984 was 60% (15-19), 58% (25-54), and 10% (60-64); in 2001, 60%, 68%, and 20%; and in 2014, 60%, 75%, and 42%.

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Over 20 years of observation from 1994 to 2014, the employment rate in Australia fluctuates. It varies between genders and three age groups.

Most of the employed men age range around 40-55 years old over the years. They dominated the job market by 90% and stayed constant. Followed by age group 35-39 years old which were constant at 60% in 1994 and 2001, but slightly dropped to 50% in 2014. This drop was followed by the increase of older workers aged 60-70 years old, which rose from 40% to 60% by 2014.

The amount of employed women age 35-39 years old stayed constant around 60% every years of observation. While the number of employed women age 40-55 years old rose from 1994 to 2014. It peaked at 90% by 2014. Same goes for the age group 60-70 which percentage significantly increased from 10% in 1994 to 40% in 2014. Overall, the amount of employed women showed positive trend over the years.

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years: 9

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women: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains inaccuracies and some irrelevant information. The age ranges provided in the report do not match the age ranges in the visual description. The percentages provided are also inaccurate. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data from the charts and ensure that the main features and comparisons are clearly presented.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow, and the connections between sentences and ideas are not always clear. For instance, the introduction is too general and doesn't effectively set up the main points. The body paragraphs jump between different age groups and genders without a clear structure. To improve coherence, consider organizing the report by gender first, then discussing the trends within each age group for each gender. Use transition words and phrases to link ideas and sentences together smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively simple and lacks the precision needed to accurately describe the data. There is some repetition of words like 'constant' and 'increased.' To enhance lexical resource, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to employment trends and percentages. For example, instead of 'stayed constant,' you could use 'remained stable' or 'showed no significant change.' Instead of 'rose,' consider 'increased,' 'grew,' or 'climbed.' Also, be more precise with your descriptions; for example, instead of 'age range around 40-55 years old,' use the specific age ranges provided in the charts (15-19, 25-54, 60-64). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'Most of the employed men age range around 40-55 years old over the years' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. It should be rephrased to accurately reflect the data, such as 'The employment rate for men aged 25-54 was the highest across all years.' Also, there are issues with subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread your work and focus on using correct sentence structures and verb tenses. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and ensure that your sentences are clear and concise.

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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of Australian men and women in three age groups who were employed in 1984, 2001 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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