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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image depicts two pie charts comparing activities in 1958 and 2008. In 1958: working is 33%, relaxing at home is 8%, sleeping is 32%, travel to work is 2%, going out (with friends/family) is 19%, and other interests or playing sports is 6%. In 2008: working is 42%, relaxing at home is 13%, sleeping is 25%, travel to work is 8%, going out (with friends/family) is 6%, and other interests or playing sports is 8%.

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the charts belows illustrate the percentage of senior citizens that spent thier times of each activities in daily life including in paticular country between 50 years from 1958 to 2008.

It is immmediately noticeable that percentage of adult who working, relaxing at home and travel to work is increased significantly. However, the percentage of adult who spended their time to sleeping and going out is declined.

Looking at detail, In 1958, the percentages of older residents that devoted times to worked is 33% in total and continued to increased significant to 42% of total, In addition, number of people who spended their times to relaxed at home also moderate rise from eight percents in 1958, to 13% of total in 2008. By 1958 number of people who spended time on travel to work and other interested activities also increased slightly from earlier to eight percent by 2008.

As the remaining spended time, By 2008, senior citizens spended their own time on slept is decreased slightly to 7% from earlier. Also, number of adults who spended times to going out with friends and families is declined dramatically from 19% in 1958 to six percentage in 2008.

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spended: 6

percentage: 4

times: 4

increased: 3

their: 3

total: 3

number: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by describing the main trends in the pie charts, such as increases in working, relaxing at home, and travel to work, and decreases in sleeping and going out. However, there are several inaccuracies and omissions. For instance, the decrease in sleeping is stated as 7%, but the actual decrease is from 32% to 25% (a 7 percentage point drop), which is not clearly conveyed. Additionally, the report incorrectly states that 'other interests' increased to 8% by 2008, but the visual description indicates it was 8% in 2008, which is correct, but the phrasing is confusing. The report also mislabels the demographic as 'senior citizens' and 'older residents,' whereas the task refers to 'working adults.' There are also grammatical and lexical errors that affect clarity. To improve, ensure accurate data representation, use precise terminology, and proofread for grammatical accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and two body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing. The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate (e.g., 'In addition' is used incorrectly). Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate key trends and comparisons. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear central topic.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task but lacks flexibility and precision. There are some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'senior citizens' instead of 'working adults', 'spended' instead of 'spent', 'devoted times to worked' instead of 'devoted time to working'). The range of vocabulary is limited, and there is repetition of 'spended' and 'increased'. To improve, use a wider variety of accurate and natural vocabulary, such as 'proportion', 'accounted for', 'rose', 'declined', and 'remained stable'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and punctuation issues that affect clarity. There are subject-verb agreement errors (e.g., 'percentage of adult who working'), incorrect verb forms (e.g., 'spended', 'is increased'), and missing articles. Sentence structures are often repetitive and lack complexity. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. Practicing with past tense and passive constructions would be beneficial.

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