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Band 7+: The charts below show the percentage ofuniversity students choosing differentways to university in the UK in 2015 and 2019. Summaries the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two pie charts detailing the percentage of university students' modes of transport to university in the UK. In 2015, the percentages for different ways were: Private car 40%, Bus 20%, Subway 15%, Bike 15%, and Walk 10%. In 2019, the corresponding percentages were: Private car 25%, Bus 35%, Subway 10%, Bike 15%, and Walk 15%.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of five means of transportation that are chosen by students studying in the university in UK in two distinctive years.

To begin with, in 2015, students would opt to take private cars more frequently which accounted for the largest share about 40%, while in 2019, the number of students who chose to go to university by bus occupied the most, over one-third of the whole proportion, representing an obvious shift for students to commute more by public transportation since the amount of private car got a significant decrease to 25% in 2019 and the figure for bus traveling could be seen a sharp increase from 20% to 35%.

What’s more, there was also a slightly upward trend could be witnessed in the number of students who prefer to walk to school, rising by 5%. By comparison, the quantity of individuals going to study by subways showed a small decline, down by 5%, turning to the least favorable way among these choices. However, a same figure could be noticed in the proportion of bike, remaining at 15%.

Overall, students tend to transform their commuting ways from private cars to more eco-friendly transportation.

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Task Response

The report effectively summarizes the main features of the pie charts and makes relevant comparisons between the years 2015 and 2019. The analysis is clear and well-organized, highlighting significant shifts in transportation preferences. To further enhance the response, consider including specific data points to support general statements and ensure precise language throughout.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear structure, but there are some areas where coherence could be improved. The flow between sentences and ideas is mostly smooth, but some transitions could be more explicit to guide the reader. For example, in the second paragraph, the connection between the decrease in private car usage and the increase in bus usage could be emphasized more directly. In the third paragraph, the phrase "What's more" is a bit generic; consider using a more specific transition to indicate the relationship between the trends being discussed. Overall, the paragraphing is effective, but refining the transitions would enhance the report's coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some instances where word choice could be more precise or natural. For example, "distinctive years" could be rephrased as "different years" or "separate years" for better clarity. The phrase "occupied the most" is acceptable but could be improved with alternatives like "represented the largest proportion" or "was the most popular choice." While the vocabulary is generally appropriate, refining these choices would elevate the lexical resource of the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, but there are some errors and phrasing issues that affect the overall accuracy. For example, "students would opt to take private cars" could be more simply stated as "students opted to take private cars." The phrase "the amount of private car got a significant decrease" is grammatically awkward and could be rephrased as "the percentage of students using private cars decreased significantly." While the grammatical range is evident, addressing these errors and refining the phrasing would improve the report's accuracy.

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Band 7+: The charts below show the percentage ofuniversity students choosing differentways to university in the UK in 2015 and 2019. Summaries the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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