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Band 5+: The charts below show the percentages of the water used in different sectors in Sydney, Australia in 1997 and 2007.

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The image shows pie charts comparing the percentage of total water use by different sectors in 1997 and 2007. In 1997: Food Industry 48%, Service Industry 13%, Building Industry 5%, Household Use 19%, Manufacturing 15%. In 2007: Food Industry 41%, Service Industry 25%, Building Industry 2%, Household Use 21%, Manufacturing 11%.

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The two pie charts compare the percentage of water which was used between 1997 and 2007 in 5 different sectors, Where the location was Sydney, Australia.

Overall, In both years the Food industry was the largest industry, although it experienced a minor decline. Meanwhile service industry showed a significant growth, while the building industry decreased.

Looking at the details, the Food industry decreased from 48% to 41% between 1997 and 2007. The Building industry decreased more than twice over the years from 5% to 2%. Similarly Manufacturing declined 4%, ending at 11%. In 1997 Service Industry was less than household use where the difference was 6%, but in 2007 despite the growth of both parts the Households showed substantial increase which allowed it to outgrow household consumption.

Regarding the remaining sectors, the Building industry and Manufacturing felt a downward trend. Manufacturing fell by 4% to reach 11% in 2007 while over the years the building industry decreased by more than half.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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industry: 9

building: 4

years: 3

decreased: 3

manufacturing: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the main trends and provides a comparison between the two years. However, there is some confusion in the data presentation in the final paragraph of the body, where the student mentions the 'Households' outgrowing 'household consumption,' which is logically circular. Additionally, there is some repetition regarding the decline of the Building and Manufacturing sectors. To improve, ensure that comparisons are logically structured and avoid repeating the same information in different ways. Pay close attention to clarity when describing the relationship between different categories.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report suffers from significant issues with logical progression and organization. There is a high degree of repetition; for example, the decline of the Building and Manufacturing sectors is mentioned multiple times in different paragraphs, which disrupts the flow. Additionally, the final paragraph repeats information already provided in the 'details' paragraph, making the structure redundant. To improve, ensure each piece of information is presented only once and group data logically (e.g., one paragraph for sectors that increased and another for those that decreased) to avoid circular writing.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for describing trends (e.g., 'minor decline', 'significant growth', 'downward trend'), but there are instances of imprecise word choice. For example, the phrase 'allowed it to outgrow household consumption' is confusing and logically flawed in context. There is also some repetition of words like 'industry' and 'decreased'. Aim to use a wider variety of synonyms and ensure that comparative structures are used accurately to describe the relationship between different sectors.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are present and occasionally impede clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, such as the use of 'Where' after a comma in the introduction, which creates a fragment. Punctuation errors, such as unnecessary capitalization (e.g., 'Overall, In both years'), also affect the professional tone. There are also errors in comparative phrasing (e.g., 'the Building industry decreased more than twice over the years'). Focus on mastering complex sentence structures and ensuring that subject-verb agreement and punctuation are used correctly to improve overall accuracy.

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