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Band 4+: The charts below show what uk graduate and pos graduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons hwere relavant.

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The image shows two bar charts. The first chart describes the destination of UK graduates (excluding full-time work) in 2008: 17,735 in part-time work, 3,500 in voluntary work, 29,665 in further study, and 16,235 unemployed. The second chart illustrates the destination of UK postgraduates (excluding full-time work) in 2008: 2,535 in part-time work, 345 in voluntary work, 2,725 in further study, and 1,625 unemployed.

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The diagram illustrates what the uk graduate and post graduate students did after leaving college rather than joining full time work in 2008.

Overall, majority graduate and post graduate students choose to study further. And the minimum students chose to do voluntary work.

The graduate students where much more attached to do post graduate (29,665) and least where interested in voluntary work (3500). And almost equal proportion of students where interested in part time work and people who remained unemployed.

In post graduate almost majority of 2535 students chose to do P.H.D in there respective subject. And the second most students (1625) where interested in part time work. And very low amount of people chose voluntary work (345). Almost 1625 students remained unemployed.

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The report provides a good overview of the main features of the charts, but it misses some important details and comparisons. For example, it doesn't mention the significant difference in the number of graduates and postgraduates who chose further study. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

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The report uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are used inaccurately or inappropriately. The report could benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

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The report contains a number of grammatical errors, which affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. The use of punctuation and sentence structure could be improved.

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