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Band 5+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into ful-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two bar charts with numerical data regarding the destinations of UK graduates and postgraduates (excluding full-time work) in 2008. The first chart for graduates shows: Part-time work - 17,735; Voluntary work - 3,500; Further study - 16,235; Unemployment - 7,200. The second chart for postgraduates presents: Part-time work - 2,535; Voluntary work - 345; Further study - 2,725; Unemployment - 1,625. The data is measured in numbers of individuals for each category.

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The bargraphs illustrate the numbers of UK graduate and post graduate students’ work choicescafter leaving college in 2008.

Overall, among the graduates and postgraduates further study was the most-preferred one.

According to the bar graphs, the number of graduate students who held further study was 29,665, whereas, that was 2725 for postgraduate ones.

Coming to part-time work, 17,735 of graduate students preferred this, which was approximately 7 times more than the number of postgraduate students who worked part-time (2535). Coming to unemployment rates,unfortunately, there were 16235 graduate students, which was almost 10 times bigger than the number of unemployed postgraduate students (1625). Furthermore, The number of graduate volunteers was also approximately 10 times bigger than the number of postgraduate volunteers: 3500 and 345, respectively.

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Task Response

The main features of the charts have been identified and compared where relevant. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data presented, such as incorrect numbers for postgraduate further study and unemployment. More precise reporting of the data would enhance the task response. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The report is generally coherent and cohesive, with a clear overall structure. Paragraphing is appropriately used to separate different aspects of the data. Some minor issues with sentence structure and transitions slightly affect the overall cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the report. However, some inaccuracies and repetitions are present, affecting the lexical resource. More varied and precise word choices would improve the lexical quality of the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

A variety of sentence structures are attempted, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that impact the accuracy and fluency of the report. More attention to grammar and sentence construction is needed for a higher score.

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Band 5+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into ful-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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