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Band 6+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time did after leaving college in 2008

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The image contains two bar charts depicting the destination of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008, excluding those in full-time work. The first chart for graduates shows the number of individuals in part-time work (17,735), voluntary work (3,500), further study (29,665), and unemployment (16,235). The second chart for postgraduates shows part-time work (2,535), voluntary work (345), further study (2,725), and unemployment (1,625).

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The bar chart illustrates the UK graduates and post-graduates who did not go into full-time jobs after quitting college in 2008

Overall, the number of graduates and post-graduates who did further study had the highest rate, while the voluntary work students had the lowest rate.

In 2008, students who did further study had the highest rate with almost 30,000. Part-time workers and unemployed students had average rates of just under 18,000 and just over 16,000 students respectively, while voluntary work students had the lowest rate among others

The post-graduate students are the same as graduates in having the highest rate in further study, but the rate of part-time worker students was higher than that of graduates. The rates of voluntary and unemployed post-graduates are similar to those of graduates. However, there is a huge difference in the numbers of post-graduates compared to graduates. Around 2,700 post-graduate students went on to further study, part-time worker students were around 2,500, and the average number of unemployed students was just over 1,600. Finally, voluntary workers made up the lowest number of 345 post-graduate students

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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students: 11

graduates: 6

post-graduates: 4

further: 4

study: 4

voluntary: 4

number: 3

highest: 3

lowest: 3

part-time: 3

unemployed: 3

post-graduate: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the two charts. It correctly identifies further study as the most common destination and voluntary work as the least common for both groups. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions: the report states that part-time work for postgraduates was higher than for graduates, which is incorrect (graduates had a higher number). Additionally, the report does not explicitly compare the overall numbers between graduates and postgraduates, though it does mention a 'huge difference.' To improve, ensure all comparisons are accurate and consider summarizing the key differences more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overall statement and separate paragraphs for graduates and postgraduates. However, the flow could be improved by using more cohesive devices to link ideas and avoid repetition. For example, the phrase 'the rate of part-time worker students was higher than that of graduates' could be more smoothly integrated. Also, the final paragraph could be better structured to compare the two groups more explicitly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but not highly varied. There is some repetition of words like 'rate' and 'students'. More precise and varied vocabulary could be used, such as 'proportion', 'figure', 'individuals', or 'pursued further study'. Additionally, some phrases are awkward, e.g., 'voluntary work students' could be 'students in voluntary work' or 'those doing voluntary work'. The report would benefit from a wider range of lexical items to achieve a higher score. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a few grammatical errors and awkward phrasings. For example, 'post-graduates' should be 'postgraduates' (without hyphen) and 'the post-graduate students are the same as graduates in having the highest rate' is awkward. Also, 'the rate of part-time worker students' is not idiomatic; it should be 'the number of part-time workers'. There are also some punctuation issues, such as missing commas. The range of structures is limited, with many simple sentences. To improve, use a variety of complex structures and ensure grammatical accuracy.

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