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Band 6+: The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time did after leaving college in 2008

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The image contains two bar charts depicting the destination of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008, excluding those in full-time work. The first chart for graduates shows the number of individuals in part-time work (17,735), voluntary work (3,500), further study (29,665), and unemployment (16,235). The second chart for postgraduates shows part-time work (2,535), voluntary work (345), further study (2,725), and unemployment (1,625).

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The bar charts illustrate the destribution of graduate and postgraduate students in the UK going part-time and voluntary work as well as studying further or being unemployment in the year of 2008. Looking from an overall perspective, what stands out from the statistics is that the number of graduates was considerably higher than postgraduates academic people in all categories. In each level of study, more individuals continue studying, working part-time, being unemployment, and working part-time, respectively.

In terms of graduates excluding those working full-time, people opting to study were 29,665, more approximately 13,000 than those working part-time (17,735). Unemployed and part-time employed ones accounted for 16,225 and 3,500, respectively.

Concerning postgraduates excepting full-time employers, the number for the further study and part-time work groups were near, the former was 2,725 and the latter was 2,535, while those unemployed (1,625) were roughly five times as much as those working volunteerly (345).

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by describing the main trends and comparing the two charts. It correctly identifies that graduates outnumber postgraduates in all categories and that further study is the most common destination for both groups. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions: the order of categories in the overview is slightly confusing, and the figure for unemployed graduates is given as 16,225 instead of 16,235. Additionally, the report could be more precise in its language and structure. Overall, the response covers the requirements of the task with some lapses.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with clear paragraphing and logical progression. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the repetition of 'part-time' in the overview and the phrase 'academic people' which is slightly awkward. The use of cohesive devices is mostly effective, but some transitions could be smoother. To improve, ensure each paragraph has a clear central idea and use a variety of linking words to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is appropriate and mostly accurate, with some good attempts at paraphrasing (e.g., 'destribution' should be 'distribution', 'individuals' for 'students'). However, there are a few inaccuracies and awkward phrases such as 'postgraduates academic people' and 'volunteerly' (should be 'voluntarily'). The range of vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. To improve, use more sophisticated synonyms and ensure correct word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. For example, 'being unemployment' should be 'being unemployed', 'excepting full-time employers' should be 'excluding full-time employees', and 'the former was 2,725 and the latter was 2,535' is correct but the sentence structure is a bit clumsy. There are also issues with subject-verb agreement and article usage. To improve, focus on sentence structure, verb forms, and proofreading for common errors.

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