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Band 5+: Prompt: The charts give information about the average amount of time per day spent on two common leisure activities of different age groups in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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Image for topic: Prompt: The charts give information about the average amount of time per day spent on two common leisure activities of different age groups in New Zealand. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two bar charts on the average minutes per day spent on leisure activities by different age groups. For "reading for pleasure," the minutes are: 15-24 (20), 25-34 (35), 35-44 (45), 45-54 (50), and 55+ (70). For "listening to music," the minutes are: 15-24 (80), 25-34 (60), 35-44 (45), 45-54 (60), and 55+ (75).

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The bar charts illustrate how much spent time per day for popular leisure activities for different aged groups in New Zealand.

Overall, the average minutes spent on reading book was the most popular in older aged groups more than that of young people. Mean while, the figure for listening to music was the most common all of aged groups.

Regarding spending on reading book, people from 15 to 24 was less more interesting in reading book at about 20 minutes per day. There were three groups in 15-34 aged group (at around 35 minutes), 35-44 aging categorie at about 45 minutes, 45-54 aged group at approximately 50 minutes. Above 55 aged group remained the highest figure, at about 1 hour 10 minutes per day.

The average minutes people from 15 to 24 and above 55 aged groups spending on listening to music demonstrated the highest figure, at roughly 1 hour 20 minutes per day. Next to the second highest figure lies on two types of aged groups, including 25-34 and 45-54 aged groups (1 hour). 35-44 aged group remained the lowest figure, at about 45 minutes.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

minutes: 8

groups: 6

figure: 5

about: 4

group: 4

reading: 3

people: 3

highest: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by presenting the main features of both charts and making some comparisons. The overall trend is identified, and key data points are included. However, there are some inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that slightly detract from clarity. For example, 'reading book' should be 'reading for pleasure', and the phrase 'less more interesting' is unclear. Additionally, the comparison between the two activities could be more explicit. To improve, focus on using precise vocabulary and ensure that all statements are grammatically clear and accurate.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction, an overview, and paragraphs for each activity. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear referencing (e.g., 'the figure for listening to music was the most common all of aged groups'). The overview could be more precise and better highlight key comparisons. Paragraphing is present but could be more effectively managed to separate ideas clearly. Work on using cohesive devices more naturally to improve the logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, but several word choices are inaccurate or unnatural (e.g., 'how much spent time', 'reading book', 'less more interesting', 'aging categorie'). The report would benefit from more precise and varied vocabulary, such as 'the amount of time', 'age groups', 'the highest figure', 'in contrast', etc. Avoid repetition and use synonyms effectively. Focus on collocations and appropriate academic phrasing to enhance lexical resource. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors and awkward structures that impede clarity. Examples include subject-verb agreement issues ('people from 15 to 24 was'), incorrect verb forms ('spending' vs 'spent'), and missing articles/prepositions. Sentence structures are often repetitive and lack variety. To improve, practice using a wider range of complex structures (e.g., relative clauses, passive voice) and ensure accuracy in tense, agreement, and punctuation. Proofreading is essential to eliminate basic errors.

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