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Band 6+: The charts (line chart and bar chart) show the average ticket prices and the average percentage of tickets sold in Merrintong theatre in the four quarters from 2010 to 2011

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The image contains two charts, a line chart for 'TICKET PRICE (POUNDS)' and a bar chart for 'Percentage of Sold Tickets' from Q1 2010 to Q4 2011. The ticket prices were: Q1 2010-£5.2, Q2 2010-£6.5, Q3 2010-£7.5, Q4 2010-£8.5, Q1 2011-£10.5, Q2 2011-£9.2, Q3 2011-£10.5, and Q4 2011-£10.5. The percentage of tickets sold were: Q1 2010-20%, Q2 2010-25%, Q3 2010-30%, Q4 2010-35%, Q1 2011-30%, Q2 2011-33%, Q3 2011-42%, and Q4 2011-50%.

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The line graph shows the average ticket prices, while the bar chart illustrates the proportion of tickets sold at Merrintong theatre across four quarters between 2010 and 2011.

Overall, the average ticket price increased over the period, the highest level was in 2011. At the same time, the percentage of tickets sold generally rose, with the peak in the fourth quarter of 2011.

In the first chart, in 2010, the ticket prices had a dramatic growth from the first quarter of 2010 to the first quarter of 2011, with peak 10,5 pound. Then, it decreased to 9,2 pound in second quarter in 2011. At the end, it climbed back to 10.5 pounds on last two quarters.

On the second chart, the percentage of sold tickets had gradually increased from the first quarter to fourth quarter of 2010, however in 2011 the proportion was thirty percent on first quarter. In addition, it had slightly rose from second quarter to fourth quarter of 2011.

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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

quarter: 9

first: 5

ticket: 3

chart: 3

tickets: 3

fourth: 3

second: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task, providing a general overview of the trends in ticket prices and sales percentages. The overall trends are identified, and some specific data points are mentioned. To improve, focus on providing more precise data and comparisons, and ensure clarity in describing the fluctuations and relationships between the two charts. Also, pay attention to grammatical accuracy and word choice to enhance the clarity and coherence of the report.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally organized with a clear introduction, overview, and separate paragraphs for each chart. However, the flow could be improved with better transitions between sentences and ideas within paragraphs. Consider using cohesive devices more effectively to link related information and improve the overall readability.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary relevant to the task, such as 'proportion,' 'gradually increased,' and 'dramatic growth.' However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or varied. For example, consider using synonyms for 'increased' and 'rose' to avoid repetition. Expanding the range of vocabulary related to trends and changes would enhance the report. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are grammatical errors present, such as incorrect verb tenses ('had a dramatic growth'), incorrect preposition use ('with peak 10,5 pound'), and subject-verb agreement issues. Correcting these errors and ensuring consistent grammatical accuracy would improve the clarity and credibility of the report.

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