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Band 6+: The charts show the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reasons for the pollution. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphs; the first is a pie chart with percentages for sources of air pollution: Dust and Construction 45%, Waste Burning 17%, Transport 14%, Diesel Generator 9%, Industries 8%, Domestic Cooking 7%; the second is a bar graph showing number of deaths due to air pollution in millions for various countries: India 2.1, China 0.82, Pakistan 0.71, Nigeria 0.68, Indonesia 0.52, Russia 0.52, USA 0.48, Congo 0.46, Brazil 0.46.

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The charts below give information on the number of deaths that happened in various countries as a result of air pollution in the year 2015 and the various sources of pollution. Overall, it is immediately evident that dust and construction contributed the most to the pollution of air and India recorded the highest number of deaths due to the air pollution. The unit of measurement is in percentage and millions.

To begin, in 2015 dust and construction was the highest contributory factor to air pollution. It recorded 45% of the overall sources of pollution.This was followed by waste burning that had 17%. Domestic cooking was the least cause of air pollution with only 7% .

On the other hand, 4.2 million people died from the resultant effect of air pollution in India, making it the country with the hightest death record. Similarly, china recorded 2.1 million deaths in the same year. However, Russia, USA, congo, Brasil had almost similiar death record.

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pollution: 7

deaths: 3

recorded: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main features of both charts and makes relevant comparisons. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., the number of deaths in China). To improve, ensure all data cited is accurate and consider including a wider range of countries from the bar graph to provide a more comprehensive overview.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a clear overview and identifies the main trends in the data. The information is generally well-organized, with a clear introduction, body paragraphs, and an overall statement. However, the transition between the two charts could be smoother. Consider using more varied cohesive devices to enhance the flow of information and improve the logical connection between ideas. For example, in the last sentence, 'However, Russia, USA, congo, Brasil had almost similiar death record,' could be rephrased for better clarity and flow.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary suitable for the task. Terms like 'contributory factor' and 'resultant effect' are appropriately used. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more precise vocabulary related to environmental issues and statistical data. For instance, instead of 'similiar death record,' you could use 'comparable mortality rates.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. While most sentences are grammatically correct, there are a few errors that affect clarity. For example, '4.2 million people died from the resultant effect of air pollution in India, making it the country with the hightest death record' contains a typo ('hightest') and could be phrased more accurately. Pay closer attention to subject-verb agreement, correct spelling, and precise wording to improve grammatical accuracy.

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