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Band 5+: The charts show the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reasons for the pollution. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphs; the first is a pie chart with percentages for sources of air pollution: Dust and Construction 45%, Waste Burning 17%, Transport 14%, Diesel Generator 9%, Industries 8%, Domestic Cooking 7%; the second is a bar graph showing number of deaths due to air pollution in millions for various countries: India 2.1, China 0.82, Pakistan 0.71, Nigeria 0.68, Indonesia 0.52, Russia 0.52, USA 0.48, Congo 0.46, Brazil 0.46.

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The pictures illustrate the number of deaths that have occurade in eight countries (India, China, Pakistan, Nigeria, Indonesia, Russia, USA, Congo, and Brazil) due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reason for the pollution.

Overall, it can be seen that India accounted for the highest number of deaths due to air pollution while Brazil accounted for the lowest. It is clear that Dust and Construction showed the biggest percentage of sources of air pollution, whereas domestic cooking showed the smallest percentage.

Dust and Construction experienced the peak percentage of Sources of air pollution at 45% in 2015, followed by Waste burning at 17%, Transport at 14%, Diesel Generator 9%, Industries at 8% and Domestic Cooking at 7% at the same time.

India recorded the highest number of deaths due to air pollution at 42 milion followed by China at 21 million, Pakistan at 0,82 million, Nigeria at 0,71 million, Indonesia at 0,63 million, Russia at 0,58 million, USA at 0,52 million, Congo at 0,48 million and Brazil at 46 million by 2015.

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million: 8

pollution: 5

number: 3

deaths: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key features from both charts but includes inaccuracies in the data reported. The organization is generally clear, but the description could be more concise and focused on the most significant trends and comparisons. To improve, ensure data accuracy and focus on summarizing the most important information, avoiding unnecessary detail.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a general overview and identifies key trends, but the organization could be improved for better flow. The information is not grouped logically, and the transitions between the pie chart and bar graph data could be smoother. Consider dedicating separate paragraphs to each visual to enhance clarity. Also, ensure that the overall structure follows a clear progression, making it easier for the reader to follow the information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate, but there's room for improvement in terms of variety and precision. While terms like 'accounted for' and 'experienced the peak percentage' are acceptable, incorporating a wider range of synonyms and more specific vocabulary related to environmental data could enhance the report. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'number of deaths,' consider alternatives like 'mortality rate' or 'fatality figures' where appropriate.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and inaccuracies that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement issues, incorrect tense usage ('occurade' instead of 'occurred'), and numerical representation errors (e.g., '42 milion' instead of '2.1 million') are present. Correcting these errors and ensuring accurate punctuation will significantly improve the report's grammatical accuracy. Also, pay attention to the correct use of articles and prepositions for better precision.

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