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Band 5+: The charts show the number of deaths that have occurred in different countries due to air pollution in the year 2015 and the reasons for the pollution. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphs; the first is a pie chart with percentages for sources of air pollution: Dust and Construction 45%, Waste Burning 17%, Transport 14%, Diesel Generator 9%, Industries 8%, Domestic Cooking 7%; the second is a bar graph showing number of deaths due to air pollution in millions for various countries: India 2.1, China 0.82, Pakistan 0.71, Nigeria 0.68, Indonesia 0.52, Russia 0.52, USA 0.48, Congo 0.46, Brazil 0.46.

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This graph illustrates the information about various factors affecting air and number of million deaths occurred across various countries due to the air pollution in the year of 2015.

To begin with causes of air pollution, the major factor which affected the air was industries and 45% was due to this. The second important sources was burning of waste things and it was around 17% of overall impact to the air.

Turning to the deaths, India had the highest rate of death 4.2 million people died in India. whereas, China had only half of the ratio, when compared to India. And it was the next country in the order. So the difference between first and second was approximately 2.1 millions. comparing with all other nations.

From this data, it is clear that only domestic cooking source had a low impact percentage to the air. On the hand, Brazil is the one and only nation which had least count of deaths between those countries.

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The report provides an overview of the main features of the charts but lacks some specific details and comparisons as requested in the task. The information about the causes of air pollution and the number of deaths in different countries is mentioned, but the comparisons are not detailed enough.

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