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Band 5+: The charts show the percentage of people working in different sectors in Townsend in two years 1960 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents four pie charts comparing employment structures in Town A and Town B during 1960 and 2010. In 1960, Town A had 29% Manufacturing, 30% Sales, and 41% Services, whereas in 2010, the percentages changed to 20% Manufacturing, 16% Sales, and 64% Services. For Town B, the 1960 numbers show 20% Manufacturing, 10% Sales, and 70% Services, with a shift in 2010 displaying 22% Manufacturing, 25% Sales, and 58% Services.

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The pie charts provides information about the proportions and comparizons of individuals doing jobs in three various fields in Townsend in two year periods: 1960 and 1990.

Overall,town B has the largest manufacturing sectors as compared with town A where it fluctuates.

As the charts illustrates,town A had majority of the people working in manufacturing industries , followed by those working in the sales and service departments with the rates of 41%,30% and 29% respectively in 1990.By 2010, sevice production led with 64% while those rendering services in manufacturing and sales accounted for 20% and 16%.

On the other hand, Town B was dominated by persons preffering to work in the manufacturing sector.In 1990, it added up to 70% and in 2010 it droped to 53%.Sales became the second job undertaken Townsend people in both years with almost simillar rates : (20% and 22%).Service providers summarised with 10% of the population in 1990 and 25% in 2010.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but contains significant inaccuracies regarding the data and the years mentioned. There is a consistent confusion between the years 1960 and 1990, and the data points provided for Town B often contradict the visual description (for example, misidentifying the dominant sector). To improve, ensure that the data extracted from the charts is recorded accurately and that the years mentioned in the introduction match those in the body paragraphs. Additionally, focus on ensuring that the trends described (increases vs. decreases) align correctly with the figures provided.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs. However, the cohesion is weakened by several mechanical errors, such as missing spaces after punctuation (e.g., 'Overall,town B', '1990.By 2010'). There is also some confusion in the progression of ideas; for instance, the overview makes a claim about manufacturing that is not clearly supported by the subsequent data presentation. To improve, ensure that every sentence flows naturally into the next and that punctuation is used correctly to separate distinct ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is somewhat repetitive and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'comparizons', 'sevice', 'preffering', 'droped', 'simillar'). While there is an attempt to use varied terms like 'rendering services' or 'dominated by', the errors in word formation and spelling detract from the overall clarity. Aim to expand your range of synonyms for 'show' or 'work in' and prioritize accuracy in spelling to ensure a more professional tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical accuracy is a significant issue in this report. There are frequent errors in subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'charts provides', 'charts illustrates') and article usage (e.g., 'had majority of the people'). Additionally, there are issues with tense consistency and sentence structure. To improve, focus on mastering basic subject-verb agreement and the use of definite/indefinite articles. Practicing complex sentence structures will also help, but ensure the foundational grammar is secure first.

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