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Band 5+: The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image presents air pollution levels in PPM by electricity generation, transport, and industry for four countries in 2021. In China: electricity generation 60, transport 70, industry 80. In America: electricity generation 30, transport 58, industry 28. In Japan: electricity generation 15, transport 30, industry 40. In Australia: electricity generation 19, transport 18, industry 20.

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The given bar graph depicts the information of air pollution in different nations during the year 2012.

Overall, it is crystal clear that China dominated the chart in terms of polluting the air more, Whereas, Australia remained significantly lower.

To begin with, in 2012 considering the different forms of air pollution, Industry accounted for the lion’s share in China reaching at 80 PPM clearly starding out among all groups. In out Contrast, pollution from generation of electricity hits its nadir point with nearly 7PPM in Japan.

Moreover, biggest discrepancy can be observed of nearly 33 PPM between the pollution from Electricity generation and Transport in America where the former stood at approximately 24 PPM while the latter one at near about 57 PPM. Conversely, an unnotieable difference was showed in Australia where all categories like, electricity generation, transport, and Industry howering around 18 PPM in given time period.

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