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The image depicts two maps of Paradise Island, one showing its past condition and the other its present condition. The past map features a pier, a boat, a scientific research station, natural palm trees, a natural spring, and rocks in the sea. The present map, however, shows significant development with a beach, accommodations labeled "hotel complex," a swimming pool, an open restaurant, a BBQ area, and a cycle path. The island still retains the rocks in the sea, but now also includes a scenic lookout. On the water, there is also a cruise ship docked near the island.

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The maps provide insight that the paradise island in present , is not the same that before and illustrate differents changements.

Overall, in first map , it’s evident that the Paradise island is poor without activities such as swimming pool. In contrast the secondly map , it’s clear that the present Paradise island has gradually progressed with expensive activities such as cruise ship . In addition , we can observe increase of building.

Firstly, before of Paradise island is more wealthy on source naturals and present Paradise island has more crucial human sources. In fact , before the Paradise island has only 2 activities , for instance such as scientific research and natural spring , in adition they have only panini. In contrast nowadays, the Paradise island has expensive activities for people such as Hotel , BBQ additionally swimming pool . However we can observe decline of natural sources since it has only natural spring and beach such as natural source.

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The report addresses the task by summarizing the changes to Paradise Island. However, the organization is somewhat unclear, and the language contains errors that affect clarity. To improve, focus on structuring the report more logically, perhaps by grouping changes by area or type. Also, work on improving grammatical accuracy and vocabulary to express ideas more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The ideas are not presented in a coherent manner, and the connections between sentences and paragraphs are weak. The use of transitional phrases is limited and often inappropriate, making it difficult for the reader to follow the argument. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related ideas effectively. For example, the contrast between the past and present conditions of the island could be structured more clearly with better use of cohesive devices.

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The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive, with limited range and accuracy. There are instances of incorrect word choice and imprecise language, which affect the clarity of the report. The candidate could benefit from expanding their vocabulary related to describing changes and developments, as well as using more specific and descriptive language. For example, instead of saying 'expensive activities,' more precise terms like 'luxury amenities' or 'high-end facilities' could be used.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and errors in sentence structure. These errors significantly impede understanding and detract from the overall quality of the writing. The candidate needs to focus on improving their understanding and application of basic grammar rules, as well as practicing sentence construction to ensure clarity and accuracy. For example, the sentence 'before of Paradise island is more wealthy on source naturals' contains multiple errors and needs to be restructured for grammatical correctness.

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