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Band 5+: The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image illustrates the cement and concrete production processes. In cement production: limestone and clay enter a crusher to form powder, which then moves through a mixer, enters a rotating heater where it is combined with heat, exits to a grinder, and results in cement stored in bags. In concrete production: a mixture comprising 15% cement, 10% water, 25% sand, and 50% gravel (small stones) enters a concrete mixer to form concrete.

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The diagrams illustrate the levels and tools used in the process of cement-making, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

Overall, there are 2 stages: cements and concrete productions. There are some points that showing how made the product. Some information are given by percentage.

To start with cement, first stage is to mix limestone and clay, and make powder. Then, put that powder into the rotating mixer, where it will round and heat with special equipment. Cement is ready now to use, then it wrap up into the bags.

In terms of concrete-making system, which is more strightforward than cement, we need to just mix the products with special big mixer tool, so-called concrete mixer. The products are; cement with 15%, water 10%, sand 25% and gravel 50%. After that, product is ready.

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B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

cement: 5

concrete: 3

mixer: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the two main processes and attempts to describe the key stages in each. However, the description lacks detail and clarity, and the language used is quite basic. To improve, focus on providing more specific information about each stage of the processes and use more precise language to describe the equipment and materials involved. Also, ensure that the percentages related to concrete production are accurately integrated into the description. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear paragraphing and transitions, making it difficult to follow the process descriptions. The overview is very general and doesn't effectively summarise the main features. Improve the flow by using cohesive devices and organizing the information more logically.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive ('mix', 'product', 'tool'). There is limited use of specific or technical terms related to the cement-making or concrete production processes. Expand your vocabulary to describe the processes more accurately and with greater detail. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('showing how made', 'it wrap up'), incorrect word forms ('strightforward'), and awkward phrasing. Sentence structures are simple and lack complexity. Focus on improving grammatical accuracy and using a wider range of sentence structures to enhance clarity.

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