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Band 4+: the diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

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The image shows a diagram of a solar-powered water system which includes a Solar panel (photovoltaic cells), DC power from panel, water tank, water level, bore pump, and underground bore or well all designed to provide water from the ground level to the village. The solar panel converts sunlight into electrical energy, which powers the bore pump to extract water from the underground source, filling the water tank and finally distributing it to the village. No numerical data points or percentages are provided in the diagram.

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The diagram illustrates the flow of works of solar powered water pupm. The flow is sorted into four main stages: storing, conveying, convertion, and storing. Finally, water run to village.

First of all, solar panel photovoltaic cells store sunlight when it is sunny and DC power from panel enable sunlight to convert to electric power. Next, electric power is sent to bore pump underground or well.

After conveying electric power to bore pupm, electric power can move water underground to over ground level and reach to water tank by leveling up water level. Water of upperside can run from bore pupm to water tank easily.

The process of works of solar powered pupm is completed when water run to village. These stages of solar powered water pupm helps us generate electic power sustainably.

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power: 6

solar: 4

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Task Response

The report provides a general overview of the solar-powered water pump system, but it lacks specific details and accurate descriptions of the processes involved. The organization into four stages (storing, conveying, conversion, and storing) is not entirely clear or accurate based on the diagram. The language used is also quite basic and contains grammatical errors. To improve, focus on accurately describing each step of the process with more detail, using precise language, and ensuring grammatical correctness. Also, avoid adding information that is not present in the diagram. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and logical flow. The four stages mentioned (storing, conveying, conversion, and storing) are not well-defined or consistently applied throughout the description. The transitions between sentences and paragraphs are abrupt, making it difficult to follow the process. Paragraphing needs improvement to group related ideas together. Use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Firstly,' 'Subsequently,' 'In conclusion') to improve the flow and connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks precision. There are instances of incorrect word usage (e.g., 'flow of works,' 'pupm' instead of 'pump,' 'leveling up water level'). Expand your vocabulary related to processes and mechanisms. Use more specific and descriptive words to explain the functions of each component in the system. For example, instead of 'water run to village,' use 'water is distributed to the village.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect article usage. Sentence structures are simple and repetitive. Vary your sentence structures to improve readability. Pay close attention to verb tenses (present simple for describing processes) and ensure subject-verb agreement. Proofread carefully to correct grammatical errors.

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