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Band 7+: The diagram below shows the evolution of a city park from 20 years ago to the present day. Summarize the key developments by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays two diagrams of a park. The diagram titled 'Park 20 years ago' features 1 Pathway, 2 Benches, 2 areas of Bushes, 2 Lamp posts, 1 Park sign, and 1 Pond. The diagram titled 'Park today' features 1 Jogging track, 1 Kids playground, 1 Public Restroom, 1 Drinking Fountain, 3 Trash bins, 2 areas of Bushes, 2 Benches, 3 Lamp posts, 1 Park sign, and 1 Pond.

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The two map illustrate the layout of a particular city park twenty years ago and today.

Overall, a lot of new facilities have been constructed in the park, such as the addition of new benches, the expansion of the pond, and the addition of a new jogging track. Furthermore, there is seemingly no demolition of the old building in the park except the removal of some parts of the bushes.

The old pond has been increased in size, where it goes below the old track which has been upgraded into a jogging track. There is a new public restroom on the right side of the park, and a trash bin as well as a lamp post on every side of it. On the left side of the park, a new kids’ playground has been constructed immediately next to the pond. Finally, one drinking fountain is placed on the top part of the map, where new benches have been placed.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, identifying key changes and providing a general overview. However, there are some omissions and inaccuracies. For example, the number of benches has not increased. To improve, ensure all significant changes are noted and described accurately. Also, try to include more specific details and quantities to enhance the description.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear overview and logical progression. However, the connection between some sentences could be smoother. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to enhance the flow and clarity of the report. For example, in the third paragraph, the transition between the pond and the restroom could be improved.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the changes in the park. However, there's room to enhance the precision and sophistication of word choices. For instance, instead of 'a lot of new facilities have been constructed,' you could use more specific and descriptive language. Also, consider using synonyms to avoid repetition (e.g., instead of repeatedly using 'addition,' try 'introduction' or 'establishment'). Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. However, attention to detail in sentence structure and verb tense consistency could further improve the accuracy. For example, 'The two map illustrate' should be 'The two maps illustrate.' Also, ensure consistent use of articles (e.g., 'a new kids' playground' could be 'a new kids' playground').

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