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Band 6+: The diagram below shows the process by which olive oil is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image displays a diagram outlining a process with 7 numbered steps and one additional numbered item. The steps are: 1.Picking from an "olive tree"; 2.Rinsing with "Cold water"; 3.Smashing on a "Belt" to create "Olive paste"; 5.Pressing; 6.Separating into "water" and "Oli"; and 7.Storage and sale, which depicts three bottles. An item labeled "8.Bag with holes" is also shown.

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The picture illustrates how olive oil is produced.

Overall, the process consists of 7 steps beginning from harvesting olives from the trees and ending with the product being stored and ready for sale. To complete these phases, human involvement is required at several stages, especcialy at the beginning.

The initial phase takes place outdoors, where people begin picking olives from the trees. The harvested olives then are rinsed in cold water before being for crush transported via conveyor belt for smashing. After the process of crushing the resulting olive paste is separated from the stones in it.

At the following stage, the extracted paste is put into perforated bags and after that is sent to the pressing stage. Once the paste is squeezed, it is separated into two components: water and oil. Finally once this step is complete, the finished product is stored in storage tanks before being sold to cunsumers.

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Overall Band Score

6.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

olives: 3

being: 3

paste: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the main stages of the olive oil production process and provides a clear overall summary. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as missing step 4 (bag with holes) and a slight misordering of steps. The language is generally appropriate, but there are a few spelling errors (e.g., 'especcialy', 'cunsumers') and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'before being for crush transported'). To improve, ensure all steps are accurately described and check for grammatical and spelling errors.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is logically structured and easy to follow, with clear progression through the steps. However, some transitions could be smoother, and the use of cohesive devices is slightly repetitive. Consider varying linking words and phrases to enhance flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but lacks sophistication. There are some errors (e.g., 'especcialy', 'cunsumers') and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'for crush transported'). To improve, use more precise and varied terms related to the process, and proofread for spelling mistakes.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but there are several grammatical errors (e.g., 'then are rinsed', 'before being for crush transported') and punctuation issues. Work on sentence construction and ensure subject-verb agreement. Proofreading would help eliminate these errors.

Band 6+: The diagram below shows the process by which olive oil is produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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