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Band 6+: The diagram below shows what an office building looks at present and plans on future development.

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The image shows two floor plans: "The office building in the present" has sections labeled Kitchen, Canteen, Stock Room, WCs, Reception, four Offices, and two Grass areas; "Future planned development" includes two Offices, Stock Room, Reception, Meeting Area, Coffee Machine, WCs, with an Outdoor Seating Area and maintains Entrance in both layouts.

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The maps illustrate the changes of future and present changes in office building.

Overall, place whith grass on the right side of the office will turn into meeting area with coffe machine and WCs in the end of the corridor, while kitchen and canteen in the corner of the building will be removed and replaced by two offices.

Firstly, the reception that is located close to right side of the layout will be replaced in the middle. In the present development there are four offices on the left side, however in the future two of these offices will be relocated on the right and left side of the reception. Other two offices will be placed instead of kichen and canteen close to stock bloom which will be remained on the same place.

Another change will be taken on the place of grass where in the future on the right of the building will be the meeting area with coffee machine and WCs in the end of the huge corridor. However on the left side of the layout the area where the grass is located will be turned into outdoor seeting area.

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Task Response

The report appropriately addresses the task by describing the main changes between the present and future office layouts. It provides a clear overall summary and includes specific details about the relocation of offices, reception, and the transformation of grass areas. However, there are some minor inaccuracies and omissions, such as the placement of the reception and the exact location of the meeting area, and a few grammatical errors (e.g., 'whith', 'kichen', 'seeting'). To improve, ensure precise descriptions of positions and proofread for spelling and grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and body paragraphs, but the flow is sometimes disrupted by unclear referencing and awkward phrasing. For example, 'the changes of future and present changes' is redundant and confusing. The use of cohesive devices is basic, and some sentences are long and run-on, making the message harder to follow. To improve, use clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure each paragraph focuses on a distinct set of changes. Also, use a range of linking words and phrases (e.g., 'in contrast', 'similarly', 'while') to guide the reader smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, with some appropriate terms like 'relocated', 'remained', and 'outdoor seating area'. However, there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'whith', 'coffe', 'kichen', 'seeting', 'bloom' instead of 'room') and some imprecise word choices (e.g., 'changes of future and present changes', 'in the end of the corridor' instead of 'at the end'). To improve, expand your range of vocabulary related to maps and changes (e.g., 'undergo transformation', 'be converted into', 'be relocated to') and ensure correct spelling and word forms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains a number of grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement ('place... will turn' should be 'places... will turn'), incorrect prepositions ('in the end' should be 'at the end'), and missing articles ('in the future on the right of the building' should be 'in the future, on the right side of the building'). There are also run-on sentences and awkward constructions (e.g., 'Another change will be taken on the place of grass'). To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures, ensure subject-verb agreement, and proofread for common errors. Use more complex structures, such as relative clauses and passive voice, to demonstrate flexibility.

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