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Band 8+: The diagram below illustrates the current layout and proposed development of the biomedical campus at a university. Provide an overview of the information by identifying and describing the key details and include comparisons where appropriate.

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The image displays two diagrams: "PRESENT BIOMEDICAL CAMPUS" and "PLANNED BIOMEDICAL CAMPUS". The Present Campus layout includes a central Road, a Road on the left, a Car Park, a Lab, a Biochemistry building, a Walkway, a Genetics building, a Biotech building, a second Lab, one area with 7 trees, and another area with 3 trees. The Planned Campus layout includes a horizontal Road, a vertical Road on the left, a diagonal Road, a Staff Car Park, a Student Car Park, a vertical Walkway, and buildings named Genetics 1, Bioimaging (with 1 tree), a Lab, an L-shaped Biochemistry building, Genetics 2, a second Lab, and an inverted L-shaped Biotech building.

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The maps illustrate the current layout of the biomedical campus and the proposed changes for the future.

Overall, the area will undergo significant changes. The most noticeable changes will be the removal of several trees and the relocation of the road.

Looking first at the western part of the area, the road will be relocated around the campus and replaced by a walkway. Several trees will also be cut down. The Biochemistry building will be extended. A staff car park will be built in the north-western part of the area. In addition, Genetics 1 will be added, while Biomaging will be constructed at the top of the campus.

Turning to the eastern part of the campus, Genetics and the laboratory will remain unchanged, although Genetics will be renamed Genetics 2. Biotech will be expanded, while the existing car park will be converted into a student car park.

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Task Response

The report effectively addresses the task by providing a clear overview and describing key changes between the present and planned campus layouts. It is well-organized into logical paragraphs, and the main features are covered. However, there are a few minor omissions and inaccuracies: the diagonal road in the planned layout is not mentioned, and the description of the road relocation could be more precise. Additionally, the report states that the laboratory remains unchanged, but the visual description indicates two labs, and it does not mention the second lab's fate. To improve, ensure all major changes are noted and descriptions are accurate. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow, with a clear overall structure and logical paragraphing. The use of cohesive devices such as 'Overall', 'Looking first at', and 'Turning to' effectively guides the reader. However, there are minor lapses in cohesion, such as the abrupt transition from the western to the eastern part without a clear link, and the final sentence could be more smoothly integrated. Overall, the message is coherent and the structure is well managed.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, with accurate use of terms like 'relocated', 'extended', 'converted', and 'constructed'. The phrasing is generally natural and precise. However, there is some repetition (e.g., 'will be' used multiple times) and a few minor inaccuracies (e.g., 'Biomaging' instead of 'Bioimaging'). To achieve a higher score, consider using more varied and sophisticated vocabulary, such as 'undergo transformation', 'demolished', or 'redeveloped', and ensure correct spelling of technical terms.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report displays a wide range of grammatical structures used with full control. Sentences are varied and complex, and punctuation is accurate throughout. There are no noticeable grammar errors, and the passive voice is used effectively to describe changes. The grammar is consistently correct and appropriate, meeting the highest standards for this criterion.

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