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Band 4+: The diagram below shows what an office building looks at present and plans on future development.

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The image shows two floor plans: "The office building in the present" has sections labeled Kitchen, Canteen, Stock Room, WCs, Reception, four Offices, and two Grass areas; "Future planned development" includes two Offices, Stock Room, Reception, Meeting Area, Coffee Machine, WCs, with an Outdoor Seating Area and maintains Entrance in both layouts.

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There are one chart below they show two structure of the office building.The office building in the present and the office building in the Future.

Frist I talk about,the office building in the present.I can be clearly seen the present structure.in the chart the present building shows frist enterance after we enter i see the reception. The left side of the reception in the chart i see four office and and a grass area and the right side of the reception is one more grass area and the front side of the reception WCs room and a stock room and the left side of the stock room is canteen and the left side of the canteen is kitchen.this is present office building.

Now i am talking about future planned development office.First I enter the building i see reception and after that i see reception left side is one office and outdoor sitting area and the right side of the reception is a office and the next is meeting area and the front side of the reception is two offices one stock room and right side of the stock room is coffee machine and the next room is WCs room.

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reception: 8

building: 5

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The report generally addresses the requirements of the task, describing the present and future layouts of the office building. However, the inclusion of some inaccurate details and a lack of overall comparison detract from the task achievement. To improve, focus on providing a more accurate and comprehensive description, highlighting key changes and differences between the two layouts. Also, ensure the writing is more concise and avoids unnecessary repetition.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks clear organization and paragraphing. The flow of information is difficult to follow due to the absence of cohesive devices and logical connectors. Consider using more varied transitional phrases to guide the reader through the description. For example, use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' 'Furthermore,' or 'In conclusion' to link ideas and sentences more effectively. Improve paragraphing by grouping related information together.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and repetitive. There is limited use of specific or descriptive language to detail the changes in the office building. Try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to building layouts and spatial relationships. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'see,' use words like 'observe,' 'notice,' or 'find.' Also, use more precise terms to describe locations, such as 'adjacent to,' 'opposite,' or 'in the vicinity of.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and improper use of articles. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving basic grammar skills and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using simpler sentence structures to ensure accuracy.

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