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The image displays a map of Garlsdon, population 65,000, featuring two potential supermarket sites, labeled S1 and S2. S1 is positioned on the western edge within the urban zone, adjacent to the main road needed to reach Hindon, with the town situated 12 km away and a population of 10,000. S2 lies on the southern boundary of the town center, within the non-traffic zone. Branston, 16 km to the southwest, has a population of 15,000, while Cransdon, located 25 km to the southeast, has a population of 29,000. Main roads create a network connecting these areas. A railway system traverses Garlsdon from east to west, passing through the town center but missing S1 by a radius that incorporates countryside, housing, and industry. The town center is encased in a non-traffic zone near industry areas, while housing primarily envelopes the northern ease of Garlsdon, merging into the surrounding countryside.

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THE MAP BELOW ILLUSTRATES THE TOWN, CALLED GARLSDON, AND IT IS PLANNED TO BUILD A NOVEL SUPERMARKET IN ONE OF THE TWO POSSIBLE SITES.

OVERALL, THE TOWN OF GARLSDON CONSISTS OF 65000 INDIVIDUALS. BOTH THE NORTH AND SOUTH SIDE OF THE TOWN IS USED FOR INDUSTRY, WHILE THE MOST PART OF IT BELONGS TO HOUSING. THERE IS A RAILWAY THAT STARTS FROM THE NORTHERN WEST, PASSES THROUGH THE TOWN CENTRE AND LIES TO THE SOUTHERN EAST. MOREOVER, THE TOWN IS SURROUNDING BY THE COUNTRYSIDE.

IN DETAIL, THE FIRST LOCATION PLANNED FOR NEW SUPERMARKET IS IN THE COUNTRYSIDE, WHICH IS FAR FROM THE CENTRE, BUT AVAILABLE FOR THE PEOPLE WHO LIVES IN THE TOWN OF HINDON WITH POPULATION OF 10000.

THE TOWN CENTRE IS THE SECOND POSSIBLE PLACE TO CREATE A NEW SUPERMARKET. THERE IS NO TRAFFIC OBSERVED IN THIS PART OF THE TOWN. IF THE NEW SUPERMARKET BUILD ON THIS SITE, IT WILL BE BENEFICIAL FOR BOTH TOWN OF BRANSDON WITH POPULATION OF 15000 AND CRANSDON WITH 29000. THE TOWNS SITUATED 16 KM AND 25 KM AWAY FROM THE CENTRE, RESPECTIVELY.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main requirements of the task by identifying the two potential sites and mentioning the surrounding towns and populations. However, there are some inaccuracies in the description of the town's layout (e.g., the direction of the railway and the distribution of industry/housing) and the description of the first site. To improve, ensure that the spatial relationships and directions are described more precisely and that the overview focuses more on the key differences between the two sites rather than just listing general town features. Additionally, avoid using all capital letters, as this is not standard academic formatting.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, overview, and two body paragraphs. However, the progression of ideas is somewhat disjointed. The use of cohesive devices is limited, and the transition between describing the town's layout and the specific supermarket sites could be smoother. To improve, try to use more varied linking words (e.g., 'In contrast', 'Regarding the first site', 'With respect to the second option') to guide the reader through your comparison.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is functional but quite basic and repetitive. There is an over-reliance on simple words like 'town', 'people', and 'place'. Additionally, the use of 'novel' to describe a supermarket is slightly unnatural in this context; 'new' or 'proposed' would be more appropriate. To reach a higher band, aim to use more precise academic vocabulary related to geography and urban planning, such as 'residential areas', 'industrial zones', 'proximity', or 'strategic location'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and occasionally impede clarity. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'Both the north and south side... is used' should be 'are used'; 'people who lives' should be 'people who live'), article usage, and passive voice construction (e.g., 'the town is surrounding' should be 'the town is surrounded'). Furthermore, writing in all capital letters is not standard for academic reports. Focus on mastering basic sentence structures, correct tense usage, and ensuring subject-verb agreement.

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