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Band 6+: The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfont area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.

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The image compares waterfront area changes in Darwin between 2009 and 2014; in 2009: school, residential buildings, swimming pool, lake, fishing area, convention center, industrial area with six buildings, sea, footpaths, in 2014: school, residential buildings, two swimming pools, lake, fishing area, convention center, no industrial area, new university building, five additional trees at south, fishing area, harbor at southeast, sea, footpaths.

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The maps above illustrate how place at the waterfont area of a town named Darwin has changed between 2009 and 2014.

Looking from an overall perspective, the number of swimming pools has decreased, and several new facilities have been built. Furthermore, it is seen that industrial area has transformed into a territory with many trees in 2014.

In terms of 2009, a school was located the north-west of the town near the convention center. There were two swimming pools next to the sea, one of which was situated the West of the fishing area. Moreover, the largest space of the town belonged to industrial area, which covered almost the half of the town.

Regarding 2014, one of the industrial areas that was near the lake has been turned into a swimming pole. Another noticeable change is that the number of residential buildings has doubled: from three to six in 2014. While the school has not been demolished, a university and a harbour have been constructed in the west and east of the town, respectively. In addition, after the transformation of the largest industrial area to the place full of trees, the footpath has been made in the middle of it that goes through a harbour.

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Task Response

The report addresses the main changes between the two maps and provides an overview. However, there are several inaccuracies in data reporting that affect the clarity of the task achievement. For instance, the overview states that the number of swimming pools decreased, whereas the description suggests an increase or change in type, and the report later contradicts itself by mentioning a new swimming pool. Additionally, some spatial descriptions are confusing (e.g., the location of the university and harbour). To improve, ensure that all trends mentioned in the overview are consistently supported by the details in the body paragraphs and double-check the direction/location of new features.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure, moving from an introduction to an overview and then to specific details for each year. However, the progression within paragraphs could be smoother. Some cohesive devices are used effectively, but others feel a bit mechanical. To improve, try to use more varied linking words and ensure that the relationship between sentences is more fluid, rather than just listing changes one after another.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for describing the changes, using terms like 'transformed', 'constructed', and 'demolished'. However, there are some inaccuracies and repetitive uses of words. For example, 'swimming pole' is an incorrect term for 'swimming pool', and 'the place full of trees' is somewhat informal. Aim to use more precise academic vocabulary and collocations, such as 'redeveloped into a wooded area' or 'the expansion of residential zones'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical issues that affect the clarity and professionalism of the report. Issues include missing articles (e.g., 'how place at the waterfont', 'belonged to industrial area'), incorrect preposition usage, and inconsistent tense application. While you attempt complex structures, errors in subject-verb agreement and noun forms are present. Focus on mastering article usage (a/an/the) and ensuring that your verb tenses are consistent when describing past versus present states in a comparative task.

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