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The image contains two maps, one labeled "Present College" and the other "Plan in 2020". Both maps have a road at the bottom with a bus stop to the right, a car park on the left with 6 red car symbols indicating parking spaces, and a labeled garden at the top. A dotted line indicating footpath traverses from the bus stop through the center of the maps upwards. In the Present College, from left to right, there are two Classroom blocks, a Lunch Area, Reception, Toilet, and Library. In the Plan in 2020, from left to right, there are two Classroom blocks, Shop, Lunch Area, Classroom, Reception, Toilet, Library, and an additional Classroom block.

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The map show the building of a college at the present and transformation of the college to 2020 . Overall , the college premises will become more built up as studeent capacity increased noticeably . A range of modern facilities will introduced to support both academic and heatlh .

The college offer fewer facilities at the moment . Acces to the college from the north , where garden and footpath located , with lunch area situates at the opposite of the garden . Further from lounch area , there are 2 clasroom in the east overlooking to the WC and library in front , while reseption desk and clasroom block are locates above these facilities . Thera are also road in the south occuyping small part of the layout .

In the 2020 , the college will undergo mojor changes in its layout . While car park will remaine intact , the garden and will redesign into shop .Four of them will be located on the right wing of the hall, replacing the reception and the library. The toilet, which is currently in the south part of the college, will further be repositioned in the north area. Moreover, there will be a new shop beside the lunch area.

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task by describing both the current layout and the planned changes. However, there are significant issues with data accuracy and clarity. Some descriptions of the locations (e.g., east/west/north/south) do not align clearly with the visual information provided, which makes the spatial progression difficult to follow. Additionally, there is a high frequency of grammatical errors and spelling mistakes (e.g., 'studeent', 'heatlh', 'lounch', 'reseption', 'mojor') that, while not preventing understanding, detract from the overall quality. To improve, focus on using precise directional language and ensuring that the relationship between the existing buildings and the new additions is described logically and accurately.

Coherence & Cohesion

The organization of ideas is somewhat logical, but the progression is frequently interrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. While you attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'Moreover', 'While'), they do not always function effectively because the sentence structures are fractured. To improve, focus on using clearer transition signals and ensuring that each sentence flows logically into the next. Avoid starting sentences with prepositional phrases that lack a clear subject-verb relationship.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is limited and contains several spelling errors (e.g., 'studeent', 'heatlh', 'lounch', 'clasroom', 'reseption', 'mojor', 'remaine'). There is also some misuse of words, such as 'occupying' in a context that doesn't quite fit. To improve, work on your spelling accuracy and try to learn more precise synonyms for describing changes in maps, such as 'redeveloped', 'relocated', 'expanded', or 'converted'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Grammatical errors are frequent and significantly impede the reader's ability to understand the report. There are issues with subject-verb agreement (e.g., 'The map show', 'The college offer'), tense consistency, and missing auxiliary verbs (e.g., 'will introduced' instead of 'will be introduced'). There are also many errors in sentence structure and word order. I recommend focusing on basic sentence construction, particularly the use of passive voice for describing changes and ensuring that every sentence has a clear subject and a correctly conjugated verb.

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