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Band 6+: The different leisure activities favoured by Canadian boys and girls.

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The image depicts a bar chart titled "Favourite leisure activities of teenagers in Canada" with four categories: Sports at 30% (boys), 15% (girls); Computer Games at 25% (boys), 10% (girls); Music at 20% (boys), 20% (girls); and Shopping at 35% (girls), 5% (boys).

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The bar chart provides information about hobbies reported by the youth in Canada including: sports, computer games, music, shopping.

Overall, the percentage of boys’ activities was higher than the rate => that of girls’s ones for the majority of the given sectors except for music. For music, the data was approximately similar for both genders.

Regarding sports and shopping, there are significant gaps between the rates of the two genders. In sports =>A, the percentage of boys was nearly 26%, which was 10% greater than the rate of girls (approximately 11%). To be more specific in shopping ,the data of men was the highest with nearly 34% and the remaining was true for the remaining gender, made up approximately 6%.

As for the remaining sectors, whose figures show minor differences. As for computer games, the rate of young women was around 14%, which was 3% lower than the percentage of young men. Noticeably, the gap between two genders was nearly similar in music, with approximately 19%.

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music: 4

sports: 3

percentage: 3

approximately: 3

nearly: 3

remaining: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies the main features of the graph but contains some inaccuracies in the data reported. The organization is present but could be improved. The language is mostly accurate but there are some errors that affect clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report generally presents a clear overview and identifies key trends. However, the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider grouping similar points together and using more explicit transition words to guide the reader. For example, you could dedicate a paragraph to activities where boys' participation is higher and another to activities where girls' participation is higher or where participation is similar. The use of 'In sports =>A' is unclear and disrupts the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While words like 'significant gaps' and 'minor differences' are appropriate, try to incorporate more specific and descriptive language to showcase a wider range. For instance, instead of 'the data of men was the highest,' you could say 'shopping was overwhelmingly favored by girls.' Also, avoid informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Subject-verb agreement errors ('the percentage of boys was nearly 26%'), incorrect use of articles ('In sports =>A'), and awkward phrasing ('the remaining was true for the remaining gender') need attention. While the range of structures is present, accuracy needs improvement to enhance the overall quality of the writing. Pay close attention to proofreading and editing to eliminate these errors.

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