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The image shows a bar graph depicting the average percentage of daily calories from fast food consumed by men and women in different age groups in 2015. For age 18-34, men consumed 17%, women 15%. For age 35-49, men consumed 13%, women 11%. For age 50-64, men consumed approximately 10%, women just below 10%. For age 65+, men consumed 7%, women approximately 6%.

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The bar chart illustrates the average percentage of daily calories consumption accross various age groups among men and women in 2015.

Overall, it is evident that junk food consumption has been consistently decreased as people get older, while men eat slightly more than women.

In the younger age, people tend to consume junk food approximately 16%-17%, remarkably as the highest throughout the ages. Then, the value has dramatically dropped in the 35-49 age bracket, almost halving it with nearly 10% and 9% of men and women calories consumption, respectively.

Subsequently, as the age demographic shifts to 50-64, it remained consistent at roughly 9% regardless of the gender. Finally, when people reached age 65 and above, they start to cut off calories ingestion with around 4% for men and 3% for women.

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consumption: 3

women: 3

people: 3

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Task Response

The report covers the requirements of the task, providing a good overview of the data and highlighting key trends. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported, particularly in the final paragraph, and some minor omissions. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and include all the key data points. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents a generally clear overview of the data, with a discernible structure including an introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, the flow could be improved with more precise transitions between paragraphs. For instance, the shift from the 35-49 age group to the 50-64 age group could benefit from a clearer connective phrase. Paragraphing is generally adequate, but refining the transitions would enhance the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates an adequate range of vocabulary suitable for describing the bar chart. Terms like 'consumption,' 'age groups,' 'percentage,' and 'calories' are used appropriately. However, there are instances where the vocabulary could be more precise or varied. For example, using synonyms for 'consume' or 'percentage' could enhance the lexical richness. Additionally, phrases like 'junk food' are less formal; consider using 'fast food' to align with the task's terminology. Overall, while the vocabulary is sufficient, there's room for improvement in terms of sophistication and precision.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report exhibits a mix of simple and complex sentence structures, but grammatical errors and phrasing issues impact the overall clarity. For example, 'accross' should be 'across,' and 'has been consistently decreased' could be rephrased for better accuracy. The sentence 'In the younger age, people tend to consume junk food approximately 16%-17%, remarkably as the highest throughout the ages' contains awkward phrasing and grammatical inaccuracies. Similarly, 'they start to cut off calories ingestion' could be improved for better flow and accuracy. Addressing these errors and refining sentence structures would significantly enhance the grammatical accuracy and clarity of the report.

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