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Band 5+: The figure shows the result of a survey of 1000 adolescents in five different countries. The participants were asked at what age they believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people.

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The image depicts a bar chart comparing survey results from adolescents across five countries on specified rights and responsibilities ages: in USA, the age for marriage is 21, voting at 18, and criminal responsibility is 13; UK indicates marriage at 18, voting at 18, and criminal responsibility at 10; Mexico shows marriage at 18, voting at 20, and criminal responsibility at 6; Japan presents marriage at 22, voting at 20, and criminal responsibility at 14; Egypt reveals marriage at 20, voting at 18, and criminal responsibility at 7.

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The bar graph displays the age at which certain rights and responsibilities should be granted to young people according to the results of a survey from 1000 teenagers in five different countries.

Overall, Japan had the highest ages across all categories in which the adolescents believed certain rights and responsibilities should be granted, including marriage, voting, and criminal responsibility. Besides, both USA and Mexico teenagers believed that marriage and voting should be granted at the similar age. While criminal responsibility is voted to have the least age from all countries.

To start off, marriage had the highest age in Japan and UK with about 22 percent and 18 percent consecutively. However, marriage and voting had the exact same proportion in both USA and Mexico with approximately 18 percent for the former and approximately 16 percent for the latter.

Marriage remained the lowest age voted form all countries with the USA having the least at around 12 percent, followed by Egypt with 14 percent. Next, both Mexico and the UK had the same value at 15 percent and lastly Japan which had the highest age for marriage at around 22 percent.

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marriage: 5

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Task Response

The report struggles with a fundamental misunderstanding of the data type. The task asks for the 'age' at which rights should be granted, but the report treats the data as 'percentages' (e.g., '22 percent'). This is a significant error in Task Achievement, as it misinterprets the units of measurement provided in the visual description. Additionally, the overview contains a contradiction: it states Japan had the highest ages across all categories, but then claims criminal responsibility had the 'least age from all countries,' which is confusingly phrased. To improve, ensure you distinguish between the value being measured (age in years) and the frequency of responses (percentage). Focus on accurately reporting the numerical values as ages rather than proportions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report struggles with logical progression and clarity. While there is an attempt to use cohesive devices (e.g., 'Overall', 'To start off', 'However'), they are sometimes used incorrectly or lead to fragmented sentences. For instance, the sentence beginning with 'While criminal responsibility...' is a dependent clause acting as a full sentence, which disrupts the flow. Additionally, the organization of the body paragraphs is confusing because the writer switches between discussing 'ages' and 'percentages' without clear distinction, making it difficult for the reader to follow the comparison of the five countries.

Lexical Resource

There is a significant issue with lexical precision and word choice. The report frequently confuses 'age' (the unit of measurement in the task) with 'percentage' (a statistical proportion). This is a major error in a Task 1 report as it changes the fundamental meaning of the data. Furthermore, words like 'consecutively' are used incorrectly (the correct term for items in a list is 'respectively'), and 'voted to have the least age' is unnatural phrasing. To improve, ensure you are using the correct units of measurement and focus on more precise comparative vocabulary.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The grammatical range is limited, and errors are frequent enough to cause confusion. There are issues with sentence structure, such as the use of fragments (incomplete sentences) and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'Marriage remained the lowest age voted form all countries'). There are also errors in preposition usage and word formation. To improve, practice constructing complex sentences using subordinating conjunctions correctly and ensure that subject-verb agreement and sentence boundaries are strictly maintained.

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