Pie Chart

Band 5+: The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image shows two pie charts with different sections representing percentages of energy usage for various household functions. In the top chart, heating accounts for 42%, water heating 30%, refrigeration 7%, other appliances 15%, lighting 4%, and cooling 2%. In the bottom chart, heating represents 15%, water heating 32%, refrigeration 14%, other appliances 28%, lighting 8%, and cooling 3%. No other data or context is provided in the image.

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There are two pie charts, which illustrate the average Australian household used energy usage and greenhouse gas usage. Overall, the Australian household used heating at the highest proportion 42%. On the other hand, 32% was used in the greenhouse.

The first pie chart is divided into several uses. Cooling, lighting, and refrigeration were the small proportions at rates of 2%, 4%, and 7%. Furthermore, other appliances were used around the third-twentieths (15%). The most used was heating and water heating with proportions of 42% and 30% respectively. Greenhouse pie charts projected, cooling, and lighting had well below 10%. While the heating and refrigeration have similar proportions, about 14% and 15%. In addition, water heating and other appliances had a significant majority nearly 35%.

Finally, the two pie charts resembled, due to the fact that the least were cooling and lighting lower than 10%, moreover they both use the same energy for water heating approximately 30% and 32%.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
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Vocabulary Repetition:

heating: 6

charts: 3

other: 3

cooling: 3

lighting: 3

proportions: 3

water: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some main features but lacks a clear overview and sufficient comparison between the two charts. The description of the data is somewhat general and could be more precise. To improve, focus on providing a more structured overview, use more specific data references, and ensure clearer comparisons between the two charts.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information could be improved. The ideas are not always presented in a logical order, and transitions between sentences and paragraphs are sometimes abrupt. To improve coherence, consider using clearer topic sentences for each paragraph and transition words to connect ideas more smoothly. For example, you could start each paragraph with a sentence that summarizes the main point and then provide supporting details. Also, ensure that each sentence logically follows from the previous one.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for the task, but there is room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. While some appropriate terms are used, the report could benefit from a wider range of vocabulary to describe the data more effectively. For example, instead of repeatedly using 'used,' consider synonyms like 'consumed,' 'utilized,' or 'accounted for.' Additionally, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to energy consumption and greenhouse gas emissions to demonstrate a better command of the topic.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. There are instances of incorrect verb tense, subject-verb agreement errors, and awkward sentence structures. To improve grammatical accuracy, carefully proofread the report and pay attention to verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Consider using a grammar checker to identify and correct errors. Additionally, practice writing different types of sentences to improve your grammatical range.

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