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Band 5+: The first chart shows the percentage of women and men in a country involved in some kinds of home tasks (cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house). The second chart shows the amount of time each gender spent on each task per day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant

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The image presents two horizontal bar charts comparing housework participation between males and females. The first chart, titled 'Percentage of males and females who do housework', shows the following participation rates: Cooking (Males: 50%, Females: 75%), Cleaning (Males: 40%, Females: 58%), Pet care (Males: 19%, Females: 28%), and House repairs (Males: 26%, Females: 8%). The second chart, showing the amount of time spent on each task per day, indicates: Cooking (Males: 35, Females: 80), Cleaning (Males: 25, Females: 65), Pet care (Males: 15, Females: 20), and House repairs (Males: 20, Females: 5).

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The chart illustrates the proportion of women and men in a country involved in different home tasks such as cooking, cleaning, pet caring and repairing the house. Moreover, the chart shows the quantity of minutes dedicated on each task.

First of all, female is the gender that focus more their attention in home tasks. Female dedicate around 80 minutes in cooking. That activity is the first home task to male and female.

In addition, there is a huge difference between the second home task and the third one. Probably, not all the houses have a pet that is the reason why the proportion is huge. About the pet care, the percentage between male and female it is almost the same. Repairing the house is the unique activity in which male percentage it is more that female percentage.

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percentage: 3

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Task Response

The report identifies some key features but lacks overall coherence and a clear structure. The summary could be improved by providing more specific data and comparisons, and by organizing the information into a more logical flow. The language used is simple and contains some inaccuracies. To improve, focus on using more precise language, providing specific data points, and structuring the report with a clear overview, body paragraphs, and conclusion. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report presents some relevant information from the charts, but the organization and flow of ideas could be improved. The connection between sentences and paragraphs is not always clear, making it difficult to follow the main points. Consider using more transition words and phrases to link ideas and improve the overall coherence. For example, you could use phrases like 'In contrast,' 'Similarly,' or 'Furthermore' to show relationships between different tasks or genders. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the data. There is some repetition of words like 'task' and 'percentage.' To improve, try to use a wider range of vocabulary related to proportions, time, and activities. For example, instead of 'proportion,' you could use 'percentage,' 'ratio,' or 'share.' Instead of 'dedicate,' consider 'spend' or 'allocate.' Using synonyms and more specific terms will make your report more descriptive and engaging. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb forms ('female is the gender'), subject-verb agreement issues ('female dedicate'), and awkward phrasing ('the percentage between male and female it is almost the same'). These errors affect the clarity and accuracy of the report. To improve, focus on using correct grammar and sentence structure. Review basic grammar rules, such as subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and proper article usage. Proofreading carefully for errors can also help improve grammatical accuracy.

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