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Band 5+: The first graph below shows the weight (in tonnes) of fruit produced by a farm during each month in 2013, and also the amount (in tonnes) of fertiliser used. The second graph shows the volume of rainfall in each month (in millimetres). Write a report summarising the information. Select and describe the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The image contains two graphs; the top graph shows two lines representing the "Weight of fruit produced (tonnes) in 2013" and "Amount of fertiliser used (tonnes) in 2013" over 12 months; fruit weight starts at 4 tonnes in Jan, peaks at 4.5 in Apr, declines to 0.5 in Dec; fertiliser use starts at 0.5 tonnes in Jan, peaks at 1 in May, declines to 0.5 in Dec. The bottom graph is a bar chart representing "Rainfall in millimetres (mm) in 2013” over 12 months; rainfall ranges from 4 mm in Nov to 16 mm in Jun, with variations in between (14 mm in Feb, 12 mm in Mar and Apr, 10 mm in Jul, 6 mm in Dec).

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The line graphs depict the tonnage of fruit production and consumption of fertilisers by farm in 2013 per month, while the bar chart gives data on the monthly volume of rainfall in the same year.

The weight of fruit produced doubled gradually from 2.1 to 4.2 tonnes in the first 8 months until the autumn month, except March, when it remained at 2.3 tonnes. Then it is acute decline followed in the last trimester of the year. Regarding the amount of fertilisers, it is evident from the second line graph that its numbers fluctuated during the year with peaks of under 1 tonne in April and above 0.6 November approximately.

Rainfall, measured in millimetres, fluctuated during the year, reaching a maximum of 16 millimetres in February before undergoing a consistent decline to 4 millimetres until July. It remained stable next 3 months at the same 4 millimetres, however in October it showed rapid surge and slow grow followed after that until the end of the year.

In summary, the quantity of fruit produced and fertilisers used follow similar pattern increasing slowly during the first quarter and by decreasing in final two months. However, in period from mid April to mid November two figures diverse. Regarding rainfall millimetres, numbers fluctuated, showing the most in February and December.

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millimetres: 5

fruit: 3

fertilisers: 3

months: 3

until: 3

fluctuated: 3

during: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address all parts of the task, but there are significant issues with data accuracy and logical consistency. Many of the figures cited in the report do not align with the provided visual description (for example, the rainfall peaks and the fruit production values), which makes the description of trends unreliable. Additionally, the overview/summary contains contradictions, such as stating rainfall was highest in February and December, while the body paragraph suggests a different trend. To improve, ensure that the data points mentioned strictly follow the visual information provided and focus on creating a clear, logical connection between the trends observed in the different graphs.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report follows a logical structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and a summary. However, the progression of ideas is sometimes hindered by awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. For instance, the transition between describing the fruit production and the decline in the last trimester is abrupt. To improve, ensure that cohesive devices (like 'subsequently', 'in contrast', or 'following this') are used more naturally to link sentences and that the relationship between different data trends is clearly articulated.

Lexical Resource

There is an attempt to use a variety of vocabulary (e.g., 'depict', 'fluctuated', 'undergoing a consistent decline'), but there are several instances of incorrect word choices and awkward collocations. For example, 'consumption of fertilisers' is used instead of 'use', and 'it is acute decline' is grammatically incorrect and lacks a proper verb. Additionally, 'two figures diverse' is not a standard English expression. Aim to use more precise academic verbs and adjectives to describe trends, such as 'plummeted', 'stabilized', or 'diverged'.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report uses a mix of simple and complex structures, but frequent grammatical errors are present. Issues include subject-verb agreement, missing articles (e.g., 'by farm' instead of 'by a farm'), and incorrect sentence construction (e.g., 'Then it is acute decline followed in the last trimester'). There are also issues with tense consistency. To improve, focus on mastering sentence structures that describe trends (e.g., 'There was a sharp decline' vs 'The figure declined sharply') and ensure that every sentence has a clear subject and verb.

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