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Band 6+: The floor plans below show the changes that were made to a house over a six-month period.

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The image displays two floor plans, labeled 'Before' and 'After', showing changes over a six-month period. Before: the layout includes a front Verandah, an Entry, a Living room, a Kitchen, a Meals area, a Bath with a tub, and two Bedrooms, each with a 'ROBE'. After: the Verandah and the central hallway are removed; the Entry is reconfigured into an open space. The Living, Meals, and Kitchen ('Kitch.') areas are combined into an open-plan space, with the Kitchen area extended outwards. The Bath contains only a shower and toilet, and the two Bedrooms ('Bed') no longer have robes.

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The image depicts the present layout of a house and its planned alterations in six months. Overall the most significant changes to the house will be the renovation in a kitchen and a bath, removing robes and a verandah.

Regarding the layout’s left section, including the kitchen and living room , a partition between two adjoining rooms will be removed to make way for meals which once located in the top left. Furthermore, a new kitch will be added in place of the old meals, resulting in the removal of a gate at the bottom right of the kitchen.

The middle part contains a bathroom on top that stands opposite to an entry entrance. While the bathroom will remain intact, the entry entrance will be relocated to be at the central. Moreover a verandah in front of the entry entrance in the bottom will be eliminated.

The right portion will continue to showcase two bedrooms in the same order over the period. However, two robes in each room and a window in the upper ones will be removed.

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main changes to the house layout over the six-month period. The organization is generally clear, dividing the house into left, middle, and right sections. However, there are some inaccuracies and omissions. For example, the bathroom is not remaining 'intact' as the tub is being replaced with a shower. Also, the removal of the central hallway is not mentioned. To improve, ensure all significant changes are noted and described accurately. Also, avoid using the phrase 'the image depicts' and instead use 'the floor plans show'.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an adequate attempt to organize the information, but the structure could be improved for better flow. The organization into 'left section,' 'middle part,' and 'right portion' is not entirely clear and could be more logically connected to the overall changes. Consider using a more thematic approach, such as discussing the removal of walls to create open spaces, changes to the bathroom, and alterations to the bedrooms. The use of cohesive devices is present but could be more sophisticated to enhance the connection between ideas.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a range of vocabulary appropriate for the task, such as 'renovation,' 'partition,' and 'relocated.' However, there are instances where the word choice could be more precise or natural. For example, 'make way for meals which once located in the top left' could be rephrased for clarity and conciseness. Expanding the range of vocabulary related to architectural changes and spatial descriptions would further enhance the report.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a mix of simple and complex sentence structures. However, there are grammatical errors and phrasing issues that affect clarity. For example, 'Overall the most significant changes to the house will be the renovation in a kitchen and a bath' contains awkward phrasing. Similarly, 'a new kitch will be added in place of the old meals, resulting in the removal of a gate at the bottom right of the kitchen' could be restructured for better grammatical accuracy. Focus on improving sentence structure and ensuring correct use of articles, prepositions, and verb tenses.

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