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Band 4+: The flowchart below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

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The image illustrates the aluminum can recycling process in six stages: 1. Collection, 2. Cleaning, sorting, shredding, and compression, 3. Heating, 4. Rolling (2.5mm - 6mm thickness), 5. Recycling, 6. Reusing, with the recycling rate in the UK at 74%.

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Procedures of recycling aluminium cans are shown by the diagram.

Overall, there are six process of recycling which are collection then cleaning, sorting, shredding and compression and after that is a heating process before put the shredded into rolling machine. Recycling came after rolling machine and lastly the so called cans now could be reused.

First, collection process which cans be put into a bin. Secondly the bin would be going through process of cleaning, sorting and compression to remove unwanted debris. Thirdly, compressed cans now will be put in to a kiln where it is going to be heated.

Fourthly, now that it is heated next step is to make it thin with a rolling machine with approximately between 2.5mm to 6 mm thick. Fifthly, recycling process

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recycling: 4

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Task Response

The report covers the main stages of the recycling process but has some inaccuracies and omissions. The overview is present but could be clearer. The description of the stages is generally sequential, but the language is sometimes unclear or informal (e.g., 'cans be put', 'the so called cans'). The report ends abruptly without completing the final stage. To improve, ensure all stages are fully described, use more precise vocabulary, and maintain a formal tone throughout. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report attempts to describe the process but lacks clear progression and logical flow. The use of sequencing words like 'first', 'secondly' is inconsistent, and the final sentence is incomplete. Paragraphing is not effectively managed. To improve, use a clear overall summary and ensure each stage is described in a logical order with appropriate linking words.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive (e.g., 'process', 'cans'). There is limited range and some inappropriate word choices (e.g., 'procedures', 'so called'). To improve, use more precise and varied vocabulary related to recycling (e.g., 'undergo', 'shred', 'melt', 'reform') and avoid informal expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing (e.g., 'which cans be put', 'before put the shredded', 'now that it is heated next step is'). Sentence structures are simple and often incomplete. To improve, practice using a variety of sentence structures (complex and compound) and ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb forms.

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